Editorial changes based on review comments by Jeff Jaffe (made directly to me, not the list)
authorcharles
Mon, 20 Jan 2014 15:40:51 +0100
changeset 67 d25c164efacf
parent 66 9c10d4843531
child 68 fbff0fa7f073
Editorial changes based on review comments by Jeff Jaffe (made directly to me, not the list)
tr.html
--- a/tr.html	Mon Jan 20 15:11:31 2014 +0100
+++ b/tr.html	Mon Jan 20 15:40:51 2014 +0100
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
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             <a xlink:href="#RecsCR"><text font-size="14.00" font-family="Times,serif"
-                y="-14.3" x="260" text-anchor="middle">LCCR</text></a> </g>
+                y="-14.3" x="260" text-anchor="middle">CR</text></a> </g>
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@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
       lower <a href="#maturity-level">maturity level</a>. The Director <em class="rfc2119">must</em>
       inform the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/organization.html#AC">Advisory
         Committee</a> and Working Group Chairs when a Working Group's request
-      for a specification to advance in maturity level is declined and and the
+      for a specification to advance in maturity level is declined and the
       specification is returned to a Working Group for further work.</p>
     <h4 id="maturity-levels">7.1.2 Maturity Levels</h4>
     <dl>
@@ -352,9 +352,7 @@
     <p>Working Groups and Interest Groups <em class="rfc2119">may</em> make
       available "Editor's drafts". Editor's drafts have no official standing
       whatsoever, and do not imply consensus of a Working Group or Interest
-      Group, nor are their contents endorsed in any way by W3C or its members,
-      except to the extent that such contents happen to be consistent with some
-      other document which carries a higher level of endorsement.</p>
+      Group, nor are their contents endorsed in any way by W3C.</p>
     <h3 id="requirements-and-definitions">7.2 General requirements and
       definitions</h3>
     <h4 id="general-requirements">7.2.1 General requirements for Technical
@@ -362,9 +360,8 @@
     <p>Every document published as part of the technical report development
       process <em class="rfc2119 old">must</em> be a public document. The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/">index
         of W3C technical reports</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-doc-list">PUB11</a>]
-      is available at the W3C Web site. W3C will make every effort to make
-      archival documents indefinitely available at their original address in
-      their original form.</p>
+      is available at the W3C Web site. W3C strives to make archival documents
+      indefinitely available at their original address in their original form.</p>
     <p>Every document published as part of the technical report development
       process <em class="rfc2119 old">must</em> clearly indicate its <a href="#maturity-levels">maturity
         level</a>, and <em id="DocumentStatus" class="rfc2119">must</em>