Editorial cleaning:
authorcharles
Thu, 10 Oct 2013 01:11:16 +0200
changeset 38 adb1783b98a0
parent 37 eb7685363453
child 39 95aaf11e21a0
Editorial cleaning:
Cleaning markup, ToC, fix numbering (only change is that 7.4.5 becomes 7.4.3).
Made requirements for All recommendations into a bullet list for (hopefully) easier reading.
Updated status, date, etc.
linked states in the SVG diagram to maturity level definitions
tr.html
--- a/tr.html	Thu Oct 10 00:51:58 2013 +0200
+++ b/tr.html	Thu Oct 10 01:11:16 2013 +0200
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
             height="48" width="72"></a> </p>
       <h1 class="title" id="title">Recommendation Track Process, draft proposal</h1>
       <h2 id="w3c-working-draft-20-september-2012"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium"></abbr>Editors'
-        Draft 3 October 2013</h2>
+        Draft 9 October 2013</h2>
       <dl>
         <!--dt>Latest published version:</dt>
         <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/HTML-longdesc">http://www.w3.org/TR/HTML-longdesc</a></dd-->
@@ -52,8 +52,12 @@
         <p>This is a revised draft proposal to replace the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr.html">current
             chapter 7 of the W3C process document</a> with a more effective W3C
           Specification life cycle following the meeting of the W3C Advisory
-          Board on 17-18 September 2013. This document is an editor's draft for
-          the Advisory Board but does not yet fully reflect consensus.</p>
+          Board Process Task Force on 7 October 2013. This document is an
+          editor's draft for the Advisory Board but does not yet fully reflect
+          consensus. The Task Force proposed to request that the Advisory Board
+          consider, at its 14 October meeting, recommending the content of this
+          draft for adoption by the Advisory Committee as a replacement for the
+          existing Chapter 7.</p>
         <p>An earlier version was first proposed to the W3C Advisory Board on 13
           May 2013 as a possible replacement for the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr.html">current
             chapter 7 of the W3C process document</a>, and a <a href="http://yadi.sk/d/Zikwkr385JG8f">subsequent
@@ -68,10 +72,10 @@
             process for such changes</a>.</p>
         <p>I am grateful to the W3C Advisory Board, the W3C Process Community
           Group, Art Barstow, Robin Berjon, Wayne Carr, Marcos Cáceres, Ian
-          Hickson, Ian Jacobs, Ralph Swick, Anne van Kesteren, and many people I
-          have forgotten to acknowledge for suggestions, comments and
-          discussions the helped me sort out my thinking, and to Ora Lassila for
-          the image that illustrates the normal process of a W3C
+          Hickson, Ian Jacobs, Chris Lilley, Ralph Swick, Anne van Kesteren, and
+          many people I have forgotten to acknowledge for suggestions, comments
+          and discussions the helped me sort out my thinking, and to Ora Lassila
+          for the image that illustrates the normal process of a W3C
           Recommendation-track document. </p>
         <p>Please send comments on this document to, or participate in, the <a
             href="http://www.w3.org/community/w3process/">W3C Process Community
@@ -101,9 +105,6 @@
         <p>Editorially, I have tried to rationalize requirements, and clarify
           who is responsible for meeting them. I have also actively removed
           advice and general statements to keep this version short.</p>
-        <p>Note that I have generally not yet renumbered sections that are
-          deleted or moved, which explains why some items are not sequentially
-          numbered.</p>
       </div>
     </div>
     <h2>7 <a name="Reports" id="Reports">W3C Technical Report Development
@@ -133,11 +134,11 @@
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-            <text font-size="14.00" font-family="Times,serif" y="-14.3" x="147"
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+            <a xlink:href="#RecsWD"><text font-size="14.00" font-family="Times,serif"
+                y="-14.3" x="147" text-anchor="middle">WD</text></a> </g>
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+            <a xlink:href="#first-wd"><text font-size="8.00" font-family="Times,serif"
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+            <a xlink:href="#RecsW3C"><text font-size="14.00" font-family="Times,serif"
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@@ -174,45 +175,53 @@
     <h3>Table of Contents</h3>
     <ul id="mozToc">
       <!--mozToc h3 1 h4 2 h5 3 h6 4-->
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId316776">Table of Contents</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId405414">General requirements for Technical Reports</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId1729">7.1 Maturity Levels</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId318562">7.2 General Requirements for Advancement on
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId663575">Table of Contents</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId640923">General requirements for Technical Reports</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId773099">7.1 Maturity Levels</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId48944">7.2 General Requirements for Advancement on
           the Recommendation Track</a>
         <ul>
-          <li><a href="#mozTocId348163">7.2.2 Wide Review</a></li>
-          <li><a href="#mozTocId133300">7.2.3 Implementation Experience</a></li>
+          <li><a href="#mozTocId61574">7.2.1 Substantive Change</a></li>
+          <li><a href="#mozTocId776695">7.2.2 Wide Review</a></li>
+          <li><a href="#mozTocId111988">7.2.3 Implementation Experience</a></li>
         </ul>
       </li>
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId29135">7.3 Reviews and Review Responsibilities</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId412309">7.4 Advancing a Technical Report to
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId838441">7.3 Reviews and Review Responsibilities</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId983157">7.4 Advancing a Technical Report to
           Recommendation</a>
         <ul>
-          <li><a href="#mozTocId20175">7.4.1.a Working Draft</a></li>
-          <li><a href="#mozTocId87620">7.4.2 Last Call Candidate Recommendation</a></li>
-          <li><a href="#mozTocId707682">7.4.5 Publication of a W3C
+          <li><a href="#mozTocId647636">7.4.1 Working Draft</a>
+            <ul>
+              <li><a href="#mozTocId165613">7.4.1.a First Public Working Draft</a></li>
+              <li><a href="#mozTocId671592">7.4.1.b Revised Public Working
+                  Drafts</a></li>
+            </ul>
+          </li>
+          <li><a href="#mozTocId275563">7.4.2 Last Call Candidate Recommendation</a></li>
+          <li><a href="#mozTocId809317">7.4.3 Publication of a W3C
               Recommendation</a>
             <ul>
-              <li><a href="#mozTocId848355">Publishing a Last Call Candidate
+              <li><a href="#mozTocId629587">Publishing a Last Call Candidate
                   Recommendation as a W3C Recommendation</a></li>
-              <li><a href="#mozTocId961203">Publishing an Edited Recommendation
+              <li><a href="#mozTocId40322">Publishing an Edited Recommendation
                   (See also Modifying a Recommendation below)</a></li>
-              <li><a href="#mozTocId138350">For all W3C Recommendations</a></li>
+              <li><a href="#mozTocId681338">For all W3C Recommendations, in
+                  addition to meeting the general requirements for advancement,</a></li>
             </ul>
           </li>
         </ul>
       </li>
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId151871">7.5 Publishing a Working Group or Interest
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId360048">7.5 Publishing a Working Group or Interest
           Group Note</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId986536">7.6 Modifying a W3C Recommendation</a>
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId38383">7.6 Modifying a W3C Recommendation</a>
         <ul>
-          <li><a href="#mozTocId565826">7.6.1 Errata Management</a></li>
-          <li><a href="#mozTocId347486">7.6.2 Classes of Changes to a
+          <li><a href="#mozTocId72619">7.6.1 Errata Management</a></li>
+          <li><a href="#mozTocId171734">7.6.2 Classes of Changes to a
               Recommendation</a></li>
         </ul>
       </li>
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId990936">7.7 Rescinding a W3C Recommendation</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#mozTocId589973">Good practices</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId737554">7.7 Rescinding a W3C Recommendation</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#mozTocId185651">Good practices</a></li>
     </ul>
     <h3>General requirements for Technical Reports</h3>
     <p>Every document published as part of the technical report development
@@ -456,7 +465,6 @@
       specification is returned to a Working Group for further work.</p>
     <h4 id="working-draft">7.4.1 Working Draft</h4>
     <h5>7.4.1.a <a name="first-wd" id="first-wd">First Public Working Draft</a></h5>
-    <h4> </h4>
     <p>To publish the First Public Working Draft of a document, in addition to
       meeting the <a href="#transition-reqs">general requirements for
         advancement</a> a Working Group</p>
@@ -474,7 +482,7 @@
       per <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy/#sec-Exclusion">section
         4</a> of the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C
         Patent Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>].</p>
-    <h5 id="revised-wd">7.4.1b Revised Public Working Drafts</h5>
+    <h5 id="revised-wd">7.4.1.b Revised Public Working Drafts</h5>
     <p class="new">A Working Group <em class="rfc2119">should</em> publish a
       Working Draft to the W3C Technical Reports page every 6 months, or sooner
       when there have been significant changes to the document that would
@@ -560,7 +568,7 @@
     <p> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/organization.html#AC">Advisory
         Committee</a> representatives <em class="rfc2119">may</em> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/acreview.html#ACAppeal">appeal</a>
       the decision to advance the technical report.</p>
-    <h4>7.4.5 <a name="rec-publication" id="rec-publication">Publication of a
+    <h4>7.4.3 <a name="rec-publication" id="rec-publication">Publication of a
         W3C Recommendation</a></h4>
     <h5><a name="lcrec-publication" id="lcrec-publication">Publishing a Last
         Call Candidate Recommendation as a W3C Recommendation</a></h5>
@@ -601,8 +609,7 @@
       <li><span class="new"><em class="rfc2119">may</em> provisionally approve a
           Recommendation with minimal implementation experience where there is a
           compelling reason to do so. In such a case, the Director <em class="rfc2119">should</em>
-          explain the reasons for that decision. <br>
-        </span></li>
+          explain the reasons for that decision. </span></li>
     </ul>
     <h5 id="rec-edited">Publishing an Edited Recommendation (See also <a href="#rec-modify">Modifying
         a Recommendation</a> below)</h5>
@@ -618,24 +625,27 @@
     <h5>For <strong>all</strong> W3C Recommendations, in addition to meeting
       the <a href="file:///Users/chaals/Documents/w3c/ab/AB/tr.html#transition-reqs">general
         requirements for advancement</a>,</h5>
-    <p>The Director <em class="rfc2119">must</em> announce the provisional
-      approval of a Request for publication of a W3C Recommendation to the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/organization.html#AC">Advisory
-        Committee</a>.</p>
-    <p class="changed">The Advisory Committee review of the technical report <em
-        class="rfc2119">must</em> continue at least 28 days after the
-      announcement of provisional approval to publish the Edited Recommendation
-      as a W3C Recommendation. <span class="from">(was 7.4.4)</span> </p>
-    <p>If there was any <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/policies.html#def-Dissent"
-        rel="glossary" title="Definition of Dissent"><span class="dfn-instance">dissent</span></a>
-      in Advisory Committee reviews, the Director <span class="new"><em class="rfc2119">must</em>
-        publish the substantive content of the dissent to W3C and the general
-        public</span> and <em class="rfc2119">must</em> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/policies.html#formal-address">formally
-        address</a> the comment <span class="new">at least 14 days before
-        publication as a W3C Recommendation</span>. In this case the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/organization.html#AC">Advisory
-        Committee</a> <em class="rfc2119">may</em> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/acreview.html#ACAppeal">appeal</a>
-      the decision.</p>
-    <p>The Director <em class="rfc2119">must</em> announce the publication of a
-      W3C Recommendation to other W3C groups and to the public.</p>
+    <ul>
+      <li>The Director <em class="rfc2119">must</em> announce the provisional
+        approval of a Request for publication of a W3C Recommendation to the <a
+          href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/organization.html#AC">Advisory
+          Committee</a>.</li>
+      <li>The Advisory Committee review of the technical report <em class="rfc2119">must</em>
+        continue at least 28 days after the announcement of provisional approval
+        to publish the Edited Recommendation as a W3C Recommendation. <span class="from">(was
+          7.4.4)</span></li>
+      <li>If there was any <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/policies.html#def-Dissent"
+          rel="glossary" title="Definition of Dissent"><span class="dfn-instance">dissent</span></a>
+        in Advisory Committee reviews, the Director <span class="new"><em class="rfc2119">must</em>
+          publish the substantive content of the dissent to W3C and the general
+          public</span> and <em class="rfc2119">must</em> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/policies.html#formal-address">formally
+          address</a> the comment <span class="new">at least 14 days before
+          publication as a W3C Recommendation</span>. In this case the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/organization.html#AC">Advisory
+          Committee</a> <em class="rfc2119">may</em> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/acreview.html#ACAppeal">appeal</a>
+        the decision.</li>
+      <li>The Director <em class="rfc2119">must</em> announce the publication
+        of a W3C Recommendation to other W3C groups and to the public. </li>
+    </ul>
     <p>Possible next steps:</p>
     <ul>
       <li>A W3C Recommendation normally retains its status indefinitely. However
@@ -727,14 +737,14 @@
         conformance, but add no new features</dt>
       <dd>These changes <span class="rfc2119">MAY</span> affect conformance to
         the Recommendation. A change that affects conformance is one that:
-        <ol>
+        <ul>
           <li>turns conforming data, processors, or other conforming agents into
             non-conforming agents, or</li>
           <li>turns non-conforming agents into conforming ones, or</li>
           <li>clears up an ambiguity or under-specified part of the
             specification in such a way that an agent whose conformance was once
             unclear becomes clearly conforming or non-conforming.</li>
-        </ol>
+        </ul>
       </dd>
       <dt>4. New features</dt>
     </dl>
@@ -793,14 +803,14 @@
       rescind a W3C Recommendation to other W3C groups, the public, and the <a
         href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/organization.html#AC">Advisory
         Committee</a>. The announcement <em class="rfc2119">must</em>:</p>
-    <ol>
+    <ul>
       <li>indicate that this is a Proposal to Rescind a Recommendation</li>
       <li>specify the deadline for review comments, which <em class="rfc2119">must</em>
         be at least <span class="time-interval">four weeks after publication </span></li>
       <li>identify known dependencies and solicit review from all dependent
         Working Groups;</li>
       <li>solicit public review.</li>
-    </ol>
+    </ul>
     <p>If there was any <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/policies.html#def-Dissent"
         rel="glossary" title="Definition of Dissent"><span class="dfn-instance">dissent</span></a>
       in Advisory Committee reviews, the Director <span class="new"><em class="rfc2119">must</em>