Additional missing comma etc identified by dsinger (thank you)
authorcharles
Sun, 18 Dec 2016 19:19:59 +0100
changeset 217 1e7b17417e03
parent 216 918f0aafd1ad
child 218 54a963be86ef
Additional missing comma etc identified by dsinger (thank you)
cover.html
--- a/cover.html	Fri Dec 16 20:23:15 2016 +0100
+++ b/cover.html	Sun Dec 18 19:19:59 2016 +0100
@@ -2445,12 +2445,12 @@
         <li>5% of the members of the Advisory Committee</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p id="proposed-rescinded-rec">For any review of a proposal to obsolete rescind, or restore a Recommendation the Director
-        <em class="rfc2119">must</em>:</p>
+      <p id="proposed-rescinded-rec">For any <a href="#ACReview">Advisory Committee review</a> of a
+        proposal to obsolete, rescind, or restore a Recommendation the Director <em class="rfc2119">must</em>:</p>
 
       <ul>
-        <li>Announce the proposal to all Working Group Chairs, and to the Public</li>
-        <li>indicate that this is a proposal to Rescind, Obsolete, or restore, a Recommendation</li>
+        <li>announce the proposal to all Working Group Chairs, and to the Public, as well as to the Advisory Committee</li>
+        <li>indicate that this is a proposal to Rescind, Obsolete, or restore, a Recommendation as appropriate</li>
         <li>identify the Recommendation by URL</li>
         <li>publish a rationale for the proposal</li>
         <li>identify known dependencies and solicit review from all dependent Working Groups</li>