Editorial setup for draft
authorcharles
Wed, 25 Feb 2015 09:35:27 +0100
changeset 144 160a82f98868
parent 143 2d9feee90110
child 145 75d42de303be
Editorial setup for draft
cover.html
--- a/cover.html	Fri Jan 30 19:27:02 2015 +0100
+++ b/cover.html	Wed Feb 25 09:35:27 2015 +0100
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
   <body>
     <div class="head"><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img alt="W3C" src="https://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" height="48" width="72"></a>
       <h1>W3C Draft Process Document</h1>
-      <h2 class="notoc">29 January 2015 Editor's Draft</h2>
+      <h2 class="notoc">25 February 2015 Editor's Draft</h2>
       <dl>
         <dt>Latest Editor's version:</dt>
         <dd> <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html">https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html</a></dd>
@@ -51,14 +51,17 @@
     <p>W3C, including all existing chartered groups, follows the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/">most recent operative
         Process Document</a> announced to the Membership.</p>
     <p>This document is developed by the Advisory Board's Process Task Force (which anyone may join) working within the <a href="http://www.w3.org/community/w3process/">Revising
-        W3C Process Community Group</a>. This is the 28 January 2015 Editor's draft for the proposed next version of the W3C Process
+        W3C Process Community Group</a>. This is the 25 January 2015 Editor's draft for the proposed next version of the W3C Process
       Document. This document is based on the 30 September review draft, itself based on the 1 August 2014 Process, developed between the <a
         href="/2002/ab/">W3C Advisory Board</a> and the <a href="http://www.w3.org/community/w3process/">Revising W3C Process Community
         Group</a> and adopted as the currently operative Process.</p>
-    <p>Note that sections have not been renumbered from the current Operative version. This is intended to facilitate comparison for review,
-      but renumbering will occur before adoption of a New Process document.</p>
-    <p>In <em>this draft</em> line feed characters have been used in the source. A <a href="#changes">change history</a> (compared to the
-      2014 Process Document) forms part of the draft.</p>
+    <p>This draft is expected to be proposed to the Advisory Committee as a working draft with an explicit request for comment.</p>
+    <p>Note that sections have not been renumbered from the current Operative version. This is intended to facilitate comparison for review.
+      Renumbering will occur before adoption of a New Process document.</p>
+    <p>In <em>this draft</em> the default channel for <a href="#ACReview">AC review</a> has been removed in favor of a requirement for
+      each review to specify a default (<a href="http://www.w3.org/community/w3process/track/issues/154">ISSUE-154</a>), and a procedure for
+      <a href="#resignation">resignation</a> from Working (and Interest Groups has been provided (<a href="http://www.w3.org/community/w3process/track/issues/151">ISSUE-151</a>).
+      A <a href="#changes">change history</a> (compared to the 2014 Process Document) forms part of the draft.</p>
     <p>The document will continue to be developed in preparation for adopting a revised process in 2015. A further revision is anticipated,
       to be adopted in 2016.</p>
     <p>Comment is invited on the draft. Please send comments to <a href="mailto:[email protected]">[email protected]</a> (<a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-w3process/">Mailing
@@ -2110,7 +2113,9 @@
       <p>The notable changes include:</p>
       <h3>Current Editor's draft</h3>
       <ul>
-        <li>Editorial corrections - typos and markup errors</li>
+        <li>The default channel for <a href="#ACReview">AC review</a> has been removed in favor of a requirement for each review to specify
+          a default (<a href="http://www.w3.org/community/w3process/track/issues/154">ISSUE-154</a>)</li>
+        <li>A procedure for <a href="#resignation">resignation</a> from Working (and Interest Groups has been provided (<a href="http://www.w3.org/community/w3process/track/issues/151">ISSUE-151</a>)</li>
       </ul>
       <h3>Previous Editor's drafts</h3>
       <ul>