Editorial clarifications as per http://www.w3.org/mid/85e8b86a3dd04020a5675f514c59418d@BY2PR02MB426.namprd02.prod.outlook.com
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mechanical approval is normally fairly automatic, whereas for later stages
there is generally a formal review meeting to ensure the requirements have
been met before Director's approval is given.</p>
+ <p>Note that for a First Public Working Draft there is no "previous maturity
+ level".</p>
<h5 id="substantive-change">7.2.2.1 Substantive Change</h5>
<p class="issue">This subsection will probably get merged into the later
section on changes, as per <a href="http://www.w3.org/community/w3process/track/issues/72">ISSUE-72</a></p>
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as the basis of a Request for Recommendation,</li>
<li><em class="rfc2119">must</em> show adequate <a href="#implementation-experience">implementation
experience</a>,</li>
+ <li><em class="rfc2119">must</em> document how the testing and
+ implementation requirements identified as part of the transition to
+ Candidate Recommendation have been met,</li>
<li><em class="rfc2119">must</em> show that the document has received <a
href="#wide-review">wide review,</a></li>
<li><em class="rfc2119">must</em> show that all issues raised during the
@@ -627,9 +632,6 @@
<li><em class="rfc2119">must </em>identify any substantive issues raised
since the close of the review period by parties other than Advisory
Committee representatives,</li>
- <li><em class="rfc2119">must</em> document how the testing and
- implementation requirements identified as part of the transition to
- Candidate Recommendation have been met,</li>
<li><em class="rfc2119">must</em> identify where errata are tracked, and</li>
<li><em class="rfc2119">may</em> remove features identified in the
Candidate Recommendation document as "at risk" without repeating the