--- a/tr.html Thu Oct 03 22:00:11 2013 +0400
+++ b/tr.html Thu Oct 03 22:10:21 2013 +0400
@@ -344,8 +344,8 @@
<li><em class="rfc2119">must </em><span class="from">(was repeated in
maturity levels)</span> obtain Director approval.</li>
<li><em class="rfc2119 ">must</em> <span class="from">(was in 7.2)</span>
- provide public documentation of all substantive to the technical report
- since the previous step. A <dfn id="substantive-change">substantive
+ provide public documentation of all substantive changes to the technical
+ report since the previous step. A <dfn id="substantive-change">substantive
change</dfn> (whether deletion, inclusion, or other modification) is
one where someone could reasonably expect that making the change would
invalidate an individual's review or implementation experience. Other