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<h1>W3C Editor's Draft Process Document</h1>
- <h2 class="notoc">9 October 2016 Editor's Draft</h2>
+ <h2 class="notoc">11 October 2016 Editor's Draft</h2>
<dl>
<dt>Latest Editor's version:</dt>
<dd><a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html">https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html</a></dd>
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a designation, the <a href="#def-Director">Director</a> determines whether the individual will be invited to
participate in the Working Group.</p>
- <p><dfn id="inv-expert-info">To be able to participate in a Working Group as an Invited Expert</dfn>, an individual
- <em class="rfc2119">must</em> do all of the following:</p>
+ <p>To <dfn id="inv-expert-info">participate in a Working Group as an Invited Expert</dfn>, an individual
+ <em class="rfc2119">must</em>:</p>
<ul>
<li>identify the organization, if any, the individual represents as a participant in this group,</li>
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<title id="Rectrac-fpwd-label">First Public Working Draft - Exclusion Opportunity</title>
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- <tspan x="4" y="150">WG Decision</tspan>
- <tspan x="4" y="158">Director's approval</tspan></text>
+ <text font-size="8"><tspan y="132" x="0">First WD</tspan>
+ <tspan x="0" y="152">WG Decision</tspan>
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- <tspan x="225" y="90">Directors approval for</tspan>
- <tspan x="230" y="100">substantive changes</tspan></text>
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<title id="Rectrac-prbacktowd-label">Return to Working Draft</title>
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- <tspan x="102" y="188">Advisory Committee review and Director's Decision, e.g. for further work and review</tspan></text>
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+ <tspan x="90" y="192">Advisory Committee review and Director's Decision, e.g. for further work and review</tspan></text>
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<h2 id="changes">14 Changes</h2>
<p>This document is based on the <a href="https://www.w3.org/2015/Process-20150901/">1 September 2015 Process</a>.
- <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/">Detailed change logs</a> are available.</p>
-
- <p>The notable changes include:</p>
-
- <h3>Between the current draft and the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/cfef536bff0d/cover.html">3 August 2016 Draft</a>.
- <ul>
- <li>Allow Edited Recommendations to incorporate editorial changes without Advisory Committee review.
- <a href="#revised-rec">Section 6.7.2</a>.</li>
- <li>Remove the proposed restriction on publishing exclusion-triggering documents when new charters are proposed.
- Sections <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a> and <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>.</li>
- </ul>
-
- <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/cfef536bff0d/cover.html">3 August 2016 Draft</a> and the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/64c6d6a5b1c0/cover.html">31 July 2016 Draft</a>:</h3>
+ <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/">Detailed logs of all changes</a> are available.</p>
+
+ <p>Substantive changes compared to the <a href="https://www.w3.org/2015/Process-20150901/">1 September 2015 Process</a>
+ include:</p>
<ul>
- <li>Clearer requirements for charters which continue work that has already had an Exclusion Opportunity
- - section <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>.</li>
- </ul>
-
- <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/64c6d6a5b1c0/cover.html">31 July 2016 Draft</a> and
- the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/9827cf0fed91/cover.html">28 July 2016 draft</a>:</h3>
-
- <ul>
- <li>Replace diagrams of Recommendation track with new versions to improve accessibility
+ <li>Allow Edited Recommendations to incorporate editorial changes without Advisory Committee review
+ - <a href="#revised-rec">Section 6.7.2</a></li>
+ <li>Replace diagrams of Recommendation track with new versions to improve accessibility and accuracy
- section <a href="#recs-and-notes">6.1.1</a> and section <a href="#rec-modify">6.7</a></li>
- <li>Remove mention of appeal for decisions not defined in the Process
- - section <a href="#rec-rescind">7.2</a></li>
<li>Remove statement that W3C does not organise conferences
- section <a href="#GAEvents">8</a></li>
- </ul>
-
- <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/9827cf0fed91/cover.html">28 July 2016 draft</a> and the
- <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/80f98ce79b35/cover.html">18 July 2016 draft</a>:</h3>
-
- <ul>
- <li>Further editorial clarification that an Obsolete Recommendation can be "unobsoleted"
+ <li>Added a process to make a Recommendation Obsolete - section <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
+ <li>Clarified the process to rescind a Recommendation, aligning with with obsoleting a Recommendation
- section <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
- <li>More clarification for charters which continue work that has already had an Exclusion Opportunity
- - <a href="#CharterReview">5.2.3</a>, <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a>, and <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>.</li>
- </ul>
-
- <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/80f98ce79b35/cover.html">18 July 2016 draft</a> and the
- <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/f070f753bcea/cover.html">10 July 2016 draft</a>:</h3>
-
- <ul>
- <li>Editorial clarification of the status of an Obsolete Recommendation - section <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
- <li>Editorial clarification for charters which continue work that has already had an Exclusion Opportunity
- - <a href="#CharterReview">5.2.3</a>, <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a>, and <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>.</li>
- </ul>
-
- <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/f070f753bcea/cover.html">10 July 2016 draft</a> and the
- <a href="https://www.w3.org/2015/Process-20150901/">1 September 2015 Process</a></h3>
-
- <ul>
- <li>Added a process to make a Recommendation Obsolete - <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
- <li>Clarified the process to rescind a Recommendation, aligning with with obsoleting a Recommendation -
- <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
- <li>Clarified the process for continuing work on a specification initially developed under another charter -
- <a href="#CharterReview">5.2.3</a>, <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a>, <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>,
+ <li>Clarified the process for continuing work on a specification initially developed under another charter
+ - sections <a href="#CharterReview">5.2.3</a>, <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a>, <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>,
<a href="#transition-reqs">6.2.2</a>.</li>
- <li>Changed the voting for AB and TAG elections to Single Transferable Vote - <a href="AB-TAG-Elections">2.5.2</a></li>
- <li>Clarified the rights and obligations of Member Consortia and their representatives -
- <a href="#MemberBenefits">2.1.1</a></li>
- <li>Renumber - 5.2.8 becomes 5.2.7 (there was no section 5.2.7)</li>
- <li>Simplify Appeals, so they can occur whether there was dissent or not, and in a broader range of cases -
- especially <a href="#candidate-rec">6.4</a>, <a href="#rec-publication">6.6</a>, <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a>,
+ <li>Changed the voting for AB and TAG elections to Single Transferable Vote
+ - section <a href="AB-TAG-Elections">2.5.2</a></li>
+ <li>Clarified the rights and obligations of Member Consortia and their representatives
+ - section <a href="#MemberBenefits">2.1.1</a></li>
+ <li>Renumber: 5.2.8 becomes 5.2.7 because there was no section 5.2.7</li>
+ <li>Simplify Appeals, so they can occur whether there was dissent or not, and in a broader range of cases
+ - sections <a href="#candidate-rec">6.4</a>, <a href="#rec-publication">6.6</a>, <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a>,
<a href="#ReviewAppeal">7</a>, <a href="#ACAppeal">7.2</a>, <a href="ACVotes">7.3</a>,
<a href="#Submission">10</a>, <a href="#SubmissionNo">10.4</a>, <a href="#GAProcess">11</a></li>
</ul>