Edits I thought I had already made.
authorcharles
Sat, 13 Sep 2014 23:45:18 +0200
changeset 121 4af9ab4df4ce
parent 120 ed45fa608e1e
child 122 622235dd5cba
Edits I thought I had already made.
cover.html
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@@ -1867,10 +1867,7 @@
               meeting</a>. The date of the first face-to-face meeting of a
             proposed group <span class="rfc2119">MUST NOT</span> be sooner than
             <span class="time-interval">eight weeks</span> after the date of the
-            proposal. <span class="issue">This was adopted from Activities. Is
-              8 weeks from the proposal date enough, or should it be from e.g.
-              Call for Participation, or should we move the requirement to the
-              meetings information, or…?</span></li>
+            proposal.&nbsp;</li>
           <li>Communication mechanisms to be employed within the group, between
             the group and the rest of W3C, and with the general public;</li>
           <li>An estimate of the expected time commitment from participants;</li>
@@ -3389,10 +3386,11 @@
           February 2000.</dd>
       </dl>
       <h2>14 <a id="acks">Acknowledgments</a></h2>
-      <p>The following individuals have contributed to this draft for a revised
-        Process: Art Barstow (Nokia), Mark Crawford (SAP), Cullen Jennings
-        (Cisco), Eduardo Gutentag (unaffiiliated), David Singer (Apple), and
-        Josh Soref (RIM).</p>
+      <p>The following individuals have contributed to this proposal for a
+        revised Process: Daniel Appelquist (Telefonica), Art Barstow (Nokia),
+        Mark Crawford (SAP), Daniel Glazman (Disruptive Innovations), Cullen
+        Jennings (Cisco), Eduardo Gutentag (unaffiiliated), David Singer
+        (Apple), and Josh Soref (Blackberry).</p>
       <p>The following individuals contributed to the development of earlier
         versions of the Process: Jean-François Abramatic (IBM, and previously
         ILOG and W3C), Dan Appelquist (Telefonica), Art Barstow (Nokia), Ann