Resolving ISSUE-42 by clarifying references as noted in email http://w3.org/mid/op.w4due40qy3oazb@chaals.local
authorcharles
Thu, 03 Oct 2013 18:31:51 +0400
changeset 28 2f7d050e4d96
parent 27 d61df9960c23
child 29 b14221d1e198
Resolving ISSUE-42 by clarifying references as noted in email http://w3.org/mid/op.w4due40qy3oazb@chaals.local
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@@ -463,15 +463,10 @@
     <p>The Director <em class="rfc2119">must</em> announce the publication of a
       First Public Working Draft publication to other W3C groups and to the
       public. </p>
-    <p>Publishing the First Public Working Draft triggers a patent disclosure
-      request, as per <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy#sec-disclosure-requests">section
-        6.3</a> of the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C
-        Patent Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>].
-      See also <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy/#sec-exclusion-with">section
-4.1
-        of the W3C Patent Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>]
-      for information about the policy implications of the First Public Working
-      Draft. </p>
+    <p>Publishing the First Public Working Draft triggers a Call for Exclusions,
+      per <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy/#sec-Exclusion">section
+        4</a> of the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C
+        Patent Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>].</p>
     <p class="new">A working group <em class="rfc2119">should</em> publish a
       Working Draft to the W3C Technical Reports page every 6 months, or sooner
       when there have been significant changes to the document that would
@@ -534,14 +529,13 @@
     <p>The Director <em class="rfc2119">must</em> announce the publication of a
       Last Call Candidate Recommendation to other W3C groups and to the public.
     </p>
-    <p> This publication triggers a patent disclosure request, as per <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy#sec-disclosure-requests">section
-        6.3</a> of the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C
+    <p> A Last Call Candidate Recommendation corresponds to a "Last Call Working
+      Draft" as used in the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C
         Patent Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>].
-      See also <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy/#sec-exclusion-with">section
-4.1
-        of the W3C Patent Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>]
-      for information about the policy implications of the Candidate
-      Recommendation. </p>
+      Publishing a Last Call Candidate Recommendation triggers a Call for
+      Exclusions, per <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy/#sec-Exclusion">section
+        4</a> of the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C
+        Patent Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>].</p>
     <p>Possible next steps:</p>
     <ul>
       <li>Return to <a href="#hb-wd">Working Draft</a></li>
@@ -679,10 +673,10 @@
         technical report at any time, <span class="new">at the maturity level
           the specification had before publication as a Note</span></li>
     </ul>
-    <p>A document published as a Working Group Note does not imply any licensing
-      requirements, unless work is resumed and it is subsequently published as a
-      W3C Recommendation. See also the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C
-        Patent Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>].</p>
+    <p>The W3C Patent Policy does not specify any licensing requirements or
+      commitments for Working Group Notes, only for W3C Recommendations. See
+      also the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C Patent
+        Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>].</p>
     <h3>7.6 <a name="rec-modify" id="rec-modify">Modifying a W3C Recommendation</a></h3>
     <p>The following sections discuss the management of errors and the process
       for making normative changes to a Recommendation.</p>