Start edits to payment phases
authorIan Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
Mon, 23 Mar 2015 16:59:07 -0500
changeset 630 f25f456d16e7
parent 629 2a29f15557f2
child 631 d7140fa41ad8
Start edits to payment phases

- link to “additional examples” below and
rename that section.
- From that section, link back to the first example.
- Move two additional examples to the future work section.
latest/use-cases/index.html
--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html	Mon Mar 23 16:53:53 2015 -0500
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html	Mon Mar 23 16:59:07 2015 -0500
@@ -456,9 +456,9 @@
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <h2>A Basic Example of the Payment Phases</h2>
+    <h2 id="phase-example">A Example of the Payment Phases</h2>
     <p>
-The following scenario is provided to aid the reader in understanding how the
+The following (fictional) scenario is provided to aid the reader in understanding how the
 phases of the payment process apply to a real world situation. In this scenario,
 we follow Jill, who seeks a new outfit for a party. She selects items from
 PayToParty, which is a brick-and-mortar store with an online presence.
@@ -466,6 +466,8 @@
 following day.
     </p>
 
+    <p>See the appendix for <a href="#additional-examples">additional examples of the payment phases</a>.</p>
+
     <section>
       <h3>Negotiation of Purchase Terms</h3>
 
@@ -567,7 +569,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <h2>Assumptions</h2>
+    <h2 id="assumptions">Assumptions</h2>
 
     <p>
 The use cases below rely on a number of assumptions that are not
@@ -605,9 +607,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <h2>The Phases of a Payment in Detail</h2>
-    <p>
-    </p>
+    <h2 id="phases">The Phases of a Payment in Detail</h2>
 
     <section>
       <h3>Negotiation of Payment Terms</h3>
@@ -1861,8 +1861,8 @@
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <h2>The Payment Phases Applied to the Real World</h2>
-    <p>
+    <h2 id="additional-examples">Additional Examples of the Payment Phases</h2>
+    <p>Early in the document we provide an <a href="#phase-example">example of the payment phases</a>. In this appendix we provide further examples to illustrate the phase phases.
     </p>
 
     <section>
@@ -1901,6 +1901,11 @@
       </p>
     </section>
 
+  </section>
+
+  <section>
+    <h2 id="future-work">Future Work</h2>
+
     <section>
       <h3>Automatic Tax Payment</h3>
       <p>
@@ -1912,15 +1917,12 @@
       <p>
       </p>
     </section>
-  </section>
 
-  <section>
-    <h2 id="future-work">Future Work</h2>
   </secton>
 
 
   <section>
-    <h2>Acknowledgements</h2>
+    <h2 id="acks">Acknowledgements</h2>
 
     <p>
 The editors are thankful to the following contributions from members of the