--- a/model/working-copy/towards-wd4.html	Mon Feb 13 11:05:00 2012 +0000
+++ b/model/working-copy/towards-wd4.html	Mon Feb 13 11:58:17 2012 +0000
@@ -1365,12 +1365,12 @@
 
 <ol>
   <li>e1 and e2 refer to Bob in two contexts (as facebook and twitter users, respectively)
-  <li> both of e1 and e2  provide a more concrete  perspective on Bob than e3 does (each of them provides more details).
+  <li> both of e1 and e2  are more detailed then than e3.
 </ol>
 
 
 
-<p>The following two relations are introduced for expressing alternative or specialized characterisations. </p>
+<p>The following two relations are introduced for expressing alternative or specialized entities. </p>
 
 
   
@@ -1379,9 +1379,9 @@
 
 <ul>
 <li><em>id</em>:  an OPTIONAL identifier for the association between the two alternates;</li>
-<li><em>first alternate</em>: an identifier <span class="name">alt1</span> of the first of the two entities</li>
-<li><em>second alternate</em>: an identifier <span class="name">alt2</span> of the second of the two entities</li>
-<li><em>attrs</em>: an OPTIONAL set <span class="name">attrs</span> of attribute-value pairs to further describe this relation.</li>
+<li><em>firstAlternate</em>: an identifier of the first of the two entities;</li>
+<li><em>secondAlternate</em>: an identifier of the second of the two entities;</li>
+<li><em>attrs</em>: an OPTIONAL set of attribute-value pairs to further describe this relation.</li>
 </ul>
 
 
@@ -1389,8 +1389,8 @@
 
 <ul>
 <li><em>id</em>:  an OPTIONAL identifier for the association between the two entities;</li>
-<li><em>specialised entity</em>: an identifier of the specialised entity</li>
-<li><em>general entity</em>: an identifier of the entity that is being specialised</li>
+<li><em>specializedEntity</em>: an identifier of the specialised entity;</li>
+<li><em>generalEntity</em>: an identifier of the entity that is being specialised;</li>
 <li><em>attrs</em>: an OPTIONAL set of attribute-value pairs to further describe this relation.</li>
 </ul>