Minor editorial fixes suggested by Ivan
authorGraham Klyne
Thu, 07 Feb 2013 13:44:50 +0000
changeset 5500 d4cf95c11dcd
parent 5495 f505a83dab5e
child 5501 d5e7a0c76495
Minor editorial fixes suggested by Ivan
paq/prov-aq.html
--- a/paq/prov-aq.html	Thu Feb 07 12:21:09 2013 +0000
+++ b/paq/prov-aq.html	Thu Feb 07 13:44:50 2013 +0000
@@ -224,7 +224,6 @@
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-dm-20121211/">PROV-DM</a> (Candidate Recommendation), the PROV data model for provenance (this document);</li>
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-n-20121211/">PROV-N</a> (Candidate Recommendation), a notation for provenance aimed at human consumption [[!PROV-N]];</li>
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-constraints-20121211/">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a> (Candidate Recommendation), a set of constraints applying to the PROV data model [[!PROV-CONSTRAINTS]];</li>
-<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-aq-20120619/">PROV-AQ</a> (To be published as Note), the mechanisms for accessing and querying provenance (this document); </li>
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-xml-20121211/">PROV-XML</a> (To be published as Note),  an XML schema for the PROV data model [[PROV-XML]].</li>
 
 </ul>
@@ -280,7 +279,7 @@
             <dt><a href="#dfn-constrained-resource"><dfn>Constrained resource</dfn></a></dt>
             <dd>an aspect, version or instance of a <a class="internalDFN">resource</a>, about which one may wish to present some <a class="internalDFN">provenance description</a>s. For example, a weather report for a given date may be an aspect of a resource that is maintained as the current weather report. A constrained resource is itself a <a class="internalDFN">resource</a>, and may have it's own URI different from that of the original.  See also [[PROV-DM]], and [[WEBARCH]] <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/webarch/#representation-reuse" class="externalRef">section 2.3.2</a>.</dd>
             <dt><a href="#dfn-target-uri"><dfn>Target-URI</dfn></a></dt>
-            <dd>a URI denoting a <a class="internalDFN">resource</a> (including any <a class="internalDFN">constrained resource</a>), which identifies that resource for the purpose of finding and expressing <a class="internalDFN">provenance descriptions</a> associated with it (see <a href="#provenance-entities-resources" class="sectionRef"></a> for discussion)</dd>
+            <dd>a URI denoting a <a class="internalDFN">resource</a> (including any <a class="internalDFN">constrained resource</a>), which identifies that resource for the purpose of finding and expressing <a class="internalDFN">provenance descriptions</a> associated with it (see <a href="#provenance-entities-resources" class="sectionRef"></a> for discussion).</dd>
             </dt><a href="#dfn-provenance-description"><dfn>Provenance description</dfn></a></dt>
             <dd>refers to provenance represented in some fashion.</dd>
             <dt><a href="#dfn-provenance-uri"><dfn>Provenance-URI</dfn></a></dt>