--- a/model/prov-dm-constraints.html	Fri Mar 23 10:33:38 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/prov-dm-constraints.html	Fri Mar 23 10:34:36 2012 -0400
@@ -1830,8 +1830,8 @@
 occurring in an entity record MUST be declared in the namespace
 referred to by their prefix according to
 <a href="#term-attribute">Section term-attribute</a>. Furthermore,
-for each attribute, a namespace also declares the number of
-occurrences it may have in a list of attributes. An entity record is
+for each attribute, a namespace MAY also declare the number of
+occurrences the entity may have in a list of attributes. An entity record is
 valid if the number of occurrences of any of its attributes is
 compatible with this attribute's declaration it its namespace. This
 property applies to all types of records, and is referred to

--- a/model/prov-dm.html	Fri Mar 23 10:33:38 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/prov-dm.html	Fri Mar 23 10:34:36 2012 -0400
@@ -247,11 +247,11 @@
 <h4>How to read the PROV Family of Specifications</h4>
 <ul>
 <li>The primer is the entry point to PROV offering a pedagogical presentation of the provenance model.</li>
-<li>The Linked Data and Semantic Web community will then focus on PROV-O defining PROV classes and properties specified in an OWL-RL ontology. For further details, PROV-DM and PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS specify the constraints applicable to the data model, and its interpretation. PROV-SEM provides a mathematical semantics.</li>
+<li>The Linked Data and Semantic Web community should focus on PROV-O defining PROV classes and properties specified in an OWL-RL ontology. For further details, PROV-DM and PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS specify the constraints applicable to the data model, and its interpretation. PROV-SEM provides a mathematical semantics.</li>
 <li>The XML community will focus on PROV-XML defining an XML schema for PROV-DM. For further details can also be found in PROV-DM, PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS, and PROV-SEM.</li>
 <li>Developers seeking to retrieve or publish provenance should focus of PROV-AQ.</li>
-<li>Readers aiming to provenance-enable an application or seeking to map PROV to another serialization technology
-will focus on PROV-DM and PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS.  PROV-O, PROV-N, PROV-XML offer examples of mapping to RDF, text, and XML, respectively.</li>
+<li>Readers seeking to implement other PROV serializations
+should focus on PROV-DM and PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS.  PROV-O, PROV-N, PROV-XML offer examples of mapping to RDF, text, and XML, respectively.</li>
 </ul>
 
 
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@
     <section id="structure-of-this-document"> 
 <h3>Structure of this Document</h3>
 
-<p><a href="#starting-point">Section 2</a> provides a starting point for the PROV Data Model, listing some core types and their relations.</p>
+<p><a href="#starting-points">Section 2</a> provides  starting points for the PROV Data Model, listing some core types and their relations.</p>
 
 <p><a href="#prov-dm-example">Section 3</a> illustrates how PROV-DM can be used
 to express the provenance of a report published on the Web.</p>
@@ -378,8 +378,8 @@
 
 
 
-<section id='starting-point'> 
-<h1>PROV-DM Starting Point</h1>
+<section id='starting-points'> 
+<h1>PROV-DM Starting Points</h1>
 
 <p>This section provides an introduction to the PROV data model by
 overviewing its main concepts. Concepts are initially described in
@@ -2046,6 +2046,10 @@
 <section id="collection-convenience-relations">
 <h3>Convenience relations</h3>
 
+<div class="note">
+This is the only subsection of this kind in the document, and results in 4.5.4.1 and 4.5.4.2. It should be removed.
+</div>
+
 The following set of additional relations are introduced to simplify assertions about the state and state changes of collections.
 
 <section id="term-collection-bulk">
@@ -2348,7 +2352,7 @@
 A <dfn id="dfn-defaultNamespaceDeclaration">default namespace declaration</dfn> consists of a namespace. Every un-prefixed qualified name in the scope of this default namespace declaration
 refers to this namespace.</p>
 
-<p>The PROV-DM namespace is <span class="name">http://www.w3.org/ns/prov-dm/</span> (TBC).</p>
+<p>The PROV-DM namespace is <span class="name">http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#</span>.</p>
 
 </section>