--- a/model/prov-dm.html	Mon Mar 26 22:36:42 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/prov-dm.html	Tue Mar 27 09:32:37 2012 +0100
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
 (1) entities and activities, and the time at which they were created, used, or ended;
 (2) agents bearing responsibility for entities that were generated and actities that happened;
 (3) derivations between entities;
-(4) properties that link entities that refer to a same thing;
+(4) properties to link entities that refer to a same thing;
 (5) collections of entities, whose provenance can itself be tracked;
 (6) a simple annotation mechanism.
 </p>
@@ -240,15 +240,15 @@
 <li> PROV-N, a notation for provenance aimed at human consumption,</li>
 <li> PROV-O, the PROV ontology, an OWL-RL ontology allowing the mapping of PROV to RDF;</li>
 <li> PROV-AQ, the mechanisms for accessing and querying provenance; </li>
-<li> PROV-PRIMER: a primer for the PROV provenance data model,</li>
+<li> PROV-PRIMER: a primer for the PROV data model,</li>
 <li> PROV-SEM: a formal semantics for the PROV data model.</li>
-<li> PROV-XML: an XML schema for PROV data model.</li>
+<li> PROV-XML: an XML schema for the PROV data model.</li>
 </ul>
 <h4>How to read the PROV Family of Specifications</h4>
 <ul>
 <li>The primer is the entry point to PROV offering a pedagogical presentation of the provenance model.</li>
 <li>The Linked Data and Semantic Web community should focus on PROV-O defining PROV classes and properties specified in an OWL-RL ontology. For further details, PROV-DM and PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS specify the constraints applicable to the data model, and its interpretation. PROV-SEM provides a mathematical semantics.</li>
-<li>The XML community will focus on PROV-XML defining an XML schema for PROV-DM. For further details can also be found in PROV-DM, PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS, and PROV-SEM.</li>
+<li>The XML community should focus on PROV-XML defining an XML schema for PROV-DM. Further details can also be found in PROV-DM, PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS, and PROV-SEM.</li>
 <li>Developers seeking to retrieve or publish provenance should focus of PROV-AQ.</li>
 <li>Readers seeking to implement other PROV serializations
 should focus on PROV-DM and PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS.  PROV-O, PROV-N, PROV-XML offer examples of mapping to RDF, text, and XML, respectively.</li>

--- a/model/prov-n.html	Mon Mar 26 22:36:42 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/prov-n.html	Tue Mar 27 09:32:37 2012 +0100
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
 
     <section id="abstract">
 <p>
-PROV-DM, the PROV data model, is a data model for provenance that describes the entities, people and activities involved in producing a piece of data or thing. PROV-DM is structured in six components, dealing with: (1) entities and activities, and the time at which they were created, used, or ended; (2) agents bearing responsibility for entities that were generated and actities that happened; (3) derivations between entities; (4) properties that link entities that refer to a same thing; (5) collections of entities, whose provenance can itself be tracked; (6) a simple annotation mechanism.
+PROV-DM, the PROV data model, is a data model for provenance that describes the entities, people and activities involved in producing a piece of data or thing. PROV-DM is structured in six components, dealing with: (1) entities and activities, and the time at which they were created, used, or ended; (2) agents bearing responsibility for entities that were generated and actities that happened; (3) derivations between entities; (4) properties to link entities that refer to a same thing; (5) collections of entities, whose provenance can itself be tracked; (6) a simple annotation mechanism.
 <p>
 To provide examples of the PROV data model, the PROV notation (PROV-N) is introduced: aimed at human consumption, PROV-N allows serializations of PROV-DM
 instances to be created in a compact manner. PROV-N facilitates the
@@ -203,15 +203,15 @@
 <li> PROV-N, a notation for provenance aimed at human consumption (this document),</li>
 <li> PROV-O, the PROV ontology, an OWL-RL ontology allowing the mapping of PROV to RDF;</li>
 <li> PROV-AQ, the mechanisms for accessing and querying provenance; </li>
-<li> PROV-PRIMER: a primer for the PROV provenance data model,</li>
+<li> PROV-PRIMER: a primer for the PROV data model,</li>
 <li> PROV-SEM: a formal semantics for the PROV data model.</li>
-<li> PROV-XML: an XML schema for PROV data model.</li>
+<li> PROV-XML: an XML schema for the PROV data model.</li>
 </ul>
 <h4>How to read the PROV Family of Specifications</h4>
 <ul>
 <li>The primer is the entry point to PROV offering a pedagogical presentation of the provenance model.</li>
 <li>The Linked Data and Semantic Web community should focus on PROV-O defining PROV classes and properties specified in an OWL-RL ontology. For further details, PROV-DM and PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS specify the constraints applicable to the data model, and its interpretation. PROV-SEM provides a mathematical semantics.</li>
-<li>The XML community will focus on PROV-XML defining an XML schema for PROV-DM. For further details can also be found in PROV-DM, PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS, and PROV-SEM.</li>
+<li>The XML community should focus on PROV-XML defining an XML schema for PROV-DM.  Further details can also be found in PROV-DM, PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS, and PROV-SEM.</li>
 <li>Developers seeking to retrieve or publish provenance should focus of PROV-AQ.</li>
 <li>Readers seeking to implement other PROV serializations
 should focus on PROV-DM and PROV-DM-CONSTRAINTS.  PROV-O, PROV-N, PROV-XML offer examples of mapping to RDF, text, and XML, respectively.</li>