ISSUE-552
authorLuc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Thu, 01 Nov 2012 08:47:07 +0000
changeset 4596 7fc141666660
parent 4595 363ce30cec66
child 4597 eaae00388db2
ISSUE-552
model/diff.html
model/prov-dm.html
--- a/model/diff.html	Thu Nov 01 08:44:25 2012 +0000
+++ b/model/diff.html	Thu Nov 01 08:47:07 2012 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
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 <!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC '-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN' 'http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/loose.dtd'>
 <html lang="en" dir="ltr">
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@@ -1027,7 +1026,7 @@
 pre.sh_sourceCode .sh_attribute { color: #006400; }
 
 </style><link href="./extra-dm.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8"><link href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-ED" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8"></head> 
-  <body style="display: inherit; "><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img width="72" height="48" src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">PROV-DM: The PROV Data Model</h1><h2 id="subtitle"><a href="diff.html"><span class="insert">Changes</span></a><span class="insert"> since LC release</span></h2><h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-30-october-2012"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> <span class="delete">Working</span><span class="insert">Editor's</span> Draft <span class="delete">24 July</span><span class="insert">30 October</span> 2012</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html"><span class="insert">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</span></a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</a></dd><dt>Previous version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120503/</span><span class="delete"> (</span><span class="delete">color-coded diffs</span><span class="delete">)</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span></a></dd><dt>Editors:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm/">Luc Moreau</a>, University of Southampton</dd>
+  <body style="display: inherit; "><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img width="72" height="48" src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">PROV-DM: The PROV Data Model</h1><h2 id="subtitle"><a href="diff.html"><span class="insert">Changes</span></a><span class="insert"> since LC release</span></h2><h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-01-november-2012"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> <span class="delete">Working</span><span class="insert">Editor's</span> Draft <span class="delete">24 July</span><span class="insert">01 November</span> 2012</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html"><span class="insert">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</span></a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</a></dd><dt>Previous version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120503/</span><span class="delete"> (</span><span class="delete">color-coded diffs</span><span class="delete">)</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span></a></dd><dt>Editors:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm/">Luc Moreau</a>, University of Southampton</dd>
 <dd><a href="http://www.cs.ncl.ac.uk/people/Paolo.Missier">Paolo Missier</a>, Newcastle University</dd>
 <dt><span class="delete">Contributors:</span><span class="insert">Authors:</span></dt><dd><a href="http://semanticweb.org/wiki/Khalid_Belhajjame">Khalid Belhajjame</a>, University of Manchester</dd>
 <dd><span>Reza B'Far</span>, Oracle Corporation</dd>
@@ -2745,7 +2744,7 @@
   The implication here is that
      the resulting entity contains substantial content from the
      original.
-Revision is a particular case of <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> of an entity into its revised version.
+<span class="delete">Revision</span><span class="insert">A </span><dfn id="dfn-revision" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">revision</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-revision"><span class="diamond"><span class="insert"> ◊</span></span></a></sup><span class="insert"> relation</span> is a particular case of<span class="insert"> a</span> <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> <span class="delete">of</span><span class="insert">relation between</span> an entity <span class="delete">into</span><span class="insert">and</span> its revised version.
 The type is of a revision derivation is denoted by:
 <dfn title="dfn-prov:revision" id="dfn-prov:revision" class="internalDFN"><span class="name">prov:Revision</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov:revision"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>.
 <span class="insert">PROV defines no revision-specific attributes.
@@ -2754,6 +2753,9 @@
 
 
 
+
+
+
 <div class="anexample" id="anexample-revision"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">30</span><span class="insert">31</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-revision"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
 Revisiting the example of <a href="#section-example-two">Section 4.2</a>,
@@ -2780,11 +2782,11 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>A <dfn id="dfn-quotation" class="internalDFN">quotation</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-quotation"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation
- is a particular case of  <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> in which an entity is derived from an original entity by copying, or "quoting", some or all of it.
+ is a particular case of<span class="insert"> a</span>  <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> <span class="delete">in</span><span class="insert">relation, for</span> which an entity <span class="delete">is</span><span class="insert">was</span> derived from an original entity by copying, or "quoting", some or all of it.
 The type is of a quotation derivation is denoted by:
-<dfn title="dfn-prov:quotation" id="dfn-prov:quotation" class="internalDFN"><span class="name">prov:Quotation</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov:quotation"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>.
-<span class="insert">PROV defines no quotation-specific attributes.
-</span></p>
+<dfn title="dfn-prov:quotation" id="dfn-prov:quotation" class="internalDFN"><span class="name">prov:Quotation</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov:quotation"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>.<span class="insert">
+PROV defines no quotation-specific attributes.</span>
+</p>
 
 
 
@@ -2829,15 +2831,19 @@
 investigated.</p>
 
 
-<p>A <dfn id="dfn-primary-source" class="internalDFN">primary source</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-primary-source"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation is a particular case of <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> of
-secondary materials from their primary sources. It is recognized that
+
+
+<p><span class="insert">It is also important to note that a given entity might be a primary source for one entity but not another. It the reason why Primary Source is defined as a relation as opposed to a subtype of Entity.</span></p>
+
+<p>A <dfn id="dfn-primary-source" class="internalDFN">primary source</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-primary-source"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation is a particular case of <span class="insert">a </span><a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> <span class="delete">of</span><span class="insert">relation from</span>
+secondary materials <span class="delete">from</span><span class="insert">to</span> their primary sources. It is recognized that
 the determination of primary sources can be up to interpretation, and
 should be done according to conventions accepted within the
 application's domain. 
 The type is of a  primary source derivation is denoted by:
-<dfn title="dfn-prov:primary-source" id="dfn-prov:primary-source" class="internalDFN"><span class="name">prov:PrimarySource</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov:primary-source"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>.
-<span class="insert">PROV defines no attributes specific to primary source.
-</span></p>
+<dfn title="dfn-prov:primary-source" id="dfn-prov:primary-source" class="internalDFN"><span class="name">prov:PrimarySource</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov:primary-source"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>.<span class="insert">
+PROV defines no attributes specific to primary source.</span>
+</p>
 
 
 
@@ -2881,7 +2887,7 @@
 </span>
 </div>
 
-<p>Component 3 further defines a general notion of <a href="#concept-influence" class="internalDFN">influence</a>, <span class="delete">as </span>a <span class="delete">super-relation of</span><span class="insert">relation implied by</span> all relations defined so far. <a href="#figure-component3b">Figure 8</a> displays one new association class, generalizing previously introduced associations.</p>
+<p>Component 3 further defines a general notion of <a href="#concept-influence" class="internalDFN">influence</a>, <span class="delete">as a super-relation of</span><span class="insert">a relation implied by</span> all relations defined so far. <a href="#figure-component3b">Figure 8</a> displays one new association class, generalizing previously introduced associations.</p>
 
 
 <div style="text-align: center;">
@@ -4365,6 +4371,8 @@
       of derivation is on connecting a generated entity to a used  entity.
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/526"><span class="insert">ISSUE-526</span></a><span class="insert">: Added sentence clarifying sentence in section 5.5.2.
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/462"><span class="insert">ISSUE-462</span></a><span class="insert">: Added clarification regarding entity attributes (with respect to fixed aspects) and role of identifier with respect to equality.
+</span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/518"><span class="insert">ISSUE-518</span></a><span class="insert">: Added clarifying sentence of primary source.
+</span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/552"><span class="insert">ISSUE-552</span></a><span class="insert">: Clarifying phrasing around a quotation/revision/primary-source relation is a particular case of a derivation relation ...
 </span></li></ul>
 
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--- a/model/prov-dm.html	Thu Nov 01 08:44:25 2012 +0000
+++ b/model/prov-dm.html	Thu Nov 01 08:47:07 2012 +0000
@@ -3920,6 +3920,7 @@
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/526">ISSUE-526</a>: Added sentence clarifying sentence in section 5.5.2.
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/462">ISSUE-462</a>: Added clarification regarding entity attributes (with respect to fixed aspects) and role of identifier with respect to equality.
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/518">ISSUE-518</a>: Added clarifying sentence of primary source.
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/552">ISSUE-552</a>: Clarifying phrasing around a quotation/revision/primary-source relation is a particular case of a derivation relation ...
 </ul>
 
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