minor edits as per Tim's notes
authorPaolo Missier <pmissier@acm.org>
Mon, 07 Nov 2011 08:24:46 +0000
changeset 830 71c7cb9feccf
parent 829 c5aef2fe4f33
child 831 ce38eb56c0bb
child 879 108899d9fbb7
minor edits as per Tim's notes
model/ProvenanceModel.html
--- a/model/ProvenanceModel.html	Sun Nov 06 17:10:06 2011 -0500
+++ b/model/ProvenanceModel.html	Mon Nov 07 08:24:46 2011 +0000
@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@
 <br/>
 <span class="nonterminal">elementExpression</span>&nbsp;:=  
 <span class="nonterminal">entityExpression</span> 
-| <span class="nonterminal">processExecutionExecution</span> 
+| <span class="nonterminal">processExecutionExpression</span> 
 | <span class="nonterminal">agentExpression</span>
 | <span class="nonterminal">annotationExpression</span> <br/>
 <!-- -->
@@ -772,7 +772,7 @@
     <section id="expression-ProcessExecution"> 
       
 <h3>Process Execution Expression</h3>
-<p>In PROV-DM, a <dfn id="dfn-ProcessExecution">process execution expression</dfn> is a representation an identifiable activity, which performs a piece of work.</p>
+<p>In PROV-DM, a <dfn id="dfn-ProcessExecution">process execution expression</dfn> is a representation of an identifiable activity, which performs a piece of work.</p>
 
 <p>In PROV-ASN, a process execution expression's text matches the <span class='nonterminal'>processExecutionExpression</span> production of the grammar defined in this specification document.</p>
 
@@ -921,7 +921,7 @@
 <p>
 The following annotation expression</p>
 <pre class="example">
-annotation(ann1,[color="bue", screenX=20, screenY=30])
+annotation(ann1,[color="blue", screenX=20, screenY=30])
 </pre>
 <p>consists of a list of application-specific name-value pairs, intended
 to help the rendering of the expression it is associated with, by
@@ -1313,8 +1313,7 @@
 the former, we can infer the latter.</p>
 <div class='constraint' id='derivation-linked-independent'>
 Given two entity expressions denoted by <span class="name">e1</span> and <span class="name">e2</span>, <span class='conditional'>if</span> the assertion <span class="name">wasDerivedFrom(e2,e1)</span> or <span class="name">wasDerivedFrom(e2,e1,pe,q12,q1)</span>
- holds, <span class='conditional'>then</span> the
- the expression <span class="name">wasEventuallyDerivedFrom(e2,e1)</span> also holds.
+ holds, <span class='conditional'>then</span> the expression <span class="name">wasEventuallyDerivedFrom(e2,e1)</span> also holds.
   </div>
 
 <p>Hence, a process-execution independent derivation expression can be directly asserted or can be inferred (by means of <a href="#derivation-linked-independent">derivation-linked-independent</a>).</p>
@@ -2415,7 +2414,7 @@
 
 <div class='grammar'>
 <span class="nonterminal">attributionExpression</span>&nbsp;:=  
-<span class="name">wasAttributeTo</span> 
+<span class="name">wasAttributedTo</span> 
 <span class="name">(</span> 
 <span class="nonterminal">identifier</span>
 <span class="name">,</span> 
@@ -2433,7 +2432,7 @@
 
 <div class='constraint' id='attribution-implication'>
 <span class='conditional'>If</span>
-<span class="name">wasAttributeTo(e,ag)</span> holds for some identifiers
+<span class="name">wasAttributedTo(e,ag)</span> holds for some identifiers
 <span class="name">e</span> and <span class="name">ag</span>,  
 <span class='conditional'>then</span> there exists a process execution identified by <span class="name">pe</span> such that the following statements hold:
 <pre>
@@ -2451,7 +2450,7 @@
 
 
 
-<p> A quotation exression is a representation of the repeating or copying of some part of a characterized thing, compatible with 
+<p> A quotation expression is a representation of the repeating or copying of some part of a characterized thing, compatible with 
 the <span class="nonterminal">quotationExpression</span> production.</p>
 
 <div class='grammar'>
@@ -2484,8 +2483,8 @@
 <span class='conditional'>then</span> the following expressions hold:
 <pre>
 wasEventuallyDerivedDerivedFrom(e2,e1)
-wasAttributeTo(e2,ag2)
-wasAttributeTo(e1,ag1)
+wasAttributedTo(e2,ag2)
+wasAttributedTo(e1,ag1)
 </pre>
 </div>