--- a/model/glossary.html Sat Feb 25 22:17:50 2012 +0000
+++ b/model/glossary.html Sat Feb 25 22:46:31 2012 +0000
@@ -9,7 +9,8 @@
</div>
<span class="glossary" id="glossary-activity">
-An <dfn id="concept-activity">activity</dfn> is anything that can operate on entities. In particular, activities may produce, consume, or transform an entity. Activities that operate on digital entities may for example move, copy, or duplicate them.
+An <dfn id="concept-activity">activity</dfn> is anything that acts upon or with entities.
+this action can take multiple mforms: consuming, processing, transforming, modifying, relocating, using, generating, or being associated with entities. Activities that operate on digital entities may for example move, copy, or duplicate them.
</span>
<span class="glossary" id="glossary-agent">
--- a/model/glossary.js Sat Feb 25 22:17:50 2012 +0000
+++ b/model/glossary.js Sat Feb 25 22:46:31 2012 +0000
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
// with <script src="glossary.js" class="remove"></script>
//Insert glossary definitions with the following
// <div class="glossary-ref" ref="glossary-generation"></div>
-glossary_hg='http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/file//model/working-copy/glossary.html';
+glossary_hg='http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/file/0fc6749ae432/model/glossary.html';
glossary_string=
' ' +
'<html> ' +
@@ -16,7 +16,8 @@
'</div> ' +
' ' +
'<span class="glossary" id="glossary-activity"> ' +
-'An <dfn id="concept-activity">activity</dfn> is anything that can operate on entities. In particular, activities may produce, consume, or transform an entity. Activities that operate on digital entities may for example move, copy, or duplicate them. ' +
+'An <dfn id="concept-activity">activity</dfn> is anything that acts upon or with entities. ' +
+'this action can take multiple mforms: consuming, processing, transforming, modifying, relocating, using, generating, or being associated with entities. Activities that operate on digital entities may for example move, copy, or duplicate them. ' +
'</span> ' +
' ' +
'<span class="glossary" id="glossary-agent"> ' +
@@ -89,13 +90,13 @@
'<span class="glossary" id="glossary-end-event"> ' +
'An <dfn id="dfn-end-event">activity end event</dfn> is the <a title="event">instantaneous event</a> that marks the instant an activity ends. ' +
'</span> ' +
-'<span class="glossary" id="glossary-event"> ' +
-'An <em>instantaneous event</em>, or <dfn id="dfn-event">event</dfn> for short, happens in the world and marks a change in the world, in its' +
-'activities and in its entities. ' +
-'</span>' +
+' ' +
+'<span class="glossary" id="glossary-event"> ' +
+'An <em>instantaneous event</em>, or <dfn id="dfn-event">event</dfn> for short, happens in the world and marks a change in the world, in its ' +
+'activities and in its entities. ' +
+'</span> ' +
+' ' +
+' ' +
'</html> ' +
' ' +
-' ' +
-' ' +
-' ' +
' ' ;