--- a/model/working-copy/towards-wd4.html	Tue Feb 07 15:49:46 2012 +0000
+++ b/model/working-copy/towards-wd4.html	Tue Feb 07 16:26:33 2012 +0000
@@ -1127,7 +1127,13 @@
   <li><span class="name">e3</span> denoting "Bob, the person".
 </ul>
 
-<p>These entities refer to the same real person Bob, either in different contexts, or at different levels of abstraction. Specifically: e1 and e2 describe Bob from two different perspectives (as facebook and twitter users, respectively) while e3 provides a more abstract perspective (in that it provides fewer details) than both of e1 and e2. 
+<p>These entities refer to the same real person Bob, either in different contexts, or at different levels of abstraction. Specifically:
+
+
+<ol>
+  <li>e1 and e2 describe Bob from two different perspectives (as facebook and twitter users, respectively)
+  <li> both of e1 and e2  provide a more concrete  perspective on Bob than e1 does (each of them provides more details).
+</ol>
 
 <!--
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@@ -1146,14 +1152,14 @@
 
 <ul>
 
-  <li> e2 is a <em>specialization</em> of e1<span class="withAsn">, written <span class="name">specializationOf(e2,e1)</span>,</span> captures the intent of assertion (1) and (2);
+  <li> e2 is a <em>specialization</em> of e1<span class="withAsn">, written <span class="name">specializationOf(e2,e1)</span>,</span> captures the intent of (1);
   <li> e2 is an <em>alternative characterization</em> of e1<span class="withAsn">, written <span class="name">alternateOf(e2,e1)</span>,</span> captures the intent of assertion (3).
   
   </ul>
 -->
   
 
-<p>An <dfn id="dfn-Alternate">alternate relation</dfn><span class="withAsn">, written <span class="name">alternateOf(id, alt1, alt2, attrs)</span> in PROV-ASN,</span>  captures the intent of assertions (1) and (2). It has the following constituents:</p>
+<p>An <dfn id="dfn-Alternate">alternate relation</dfn><span class="withAsn">, written <span class="name">alternateOf(id, alt1, alt2, attrs)</span> in PROV-ASN,</span> addresses case (1). It has the following constituents:</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li><em>id</em>:  an OPTIONAL identifier for the association between the two alternates;</li>
@@ -1163,7 +1169,7 @@
 </ul>
 
 
-<p>A <dfn id="dfn-Specialization">specialization relation</dfn><span class="withAsn">, written <span class="name">specializationOf(id, sub, super, attrs)</span> in PROV-ASN,</span>, captures the intent of assertion (3). It  has the following constituents:</p>
+<p>A <dfn id="dfn-Specialization">specialization relation</dfn><span class="withAsn">, written <span class="name">specializationOf(id, sub, super, attrs)</span> in PROV-ASN,</span>, addresses case  (2). It  has the following constituents:</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li><em>id</em>:  an OPTIONAL identifier for the association between the two entities;</li>