update abstract and state
authorKazuyuki Ashimura <ashimura@w3.org>
Fri, 17 Aug 2012 00:48:37 +0900
changeset 81 2bdbdcf6a970
parent 80 9382ae3dce33
child 82 24be98330e73
update abstract and state
mpreq/adbreq.html
--- a/mpreq/adbreq.html	Thu Aug 16 04:04:26 2012 +0900
+++ b/mpreq/adbreq.html	Fri Aug 17 00:48:37 2012 +0900
@@ -82,19 +82,24 @@
             </script>
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 <body>
-	<section id='abstract'>The MPTF is a subset of the Web and TV
-		Interest Group. The goal of MPTF is to discuss requirements placed on
-		the HTML5 video, audio and media interfaces by media formats that used
-		for Web and TV applications. The MPTF also proposes APIs that meet
-		these requirements.</section>
+	<section id='abstract'>
+	This document lists the design goals and requirements that
+	HTML5 video, audio and media interfaces should support for Web
+	and TV applications. APIs that meet these requirements are
+	also proposed.
+        </section>
 
 	<section id="sotd">
+        The MPTF is a subset of the Web and TV Interest Group. The
+	goal of MPTF is to discuss requirements placed on the HTML5
+	video, audio and media interfaces by media formats that used
+	for Web and TV applications.  The MPTF also proposes APIs that
+	meet these requirements.
+
         The requirements and use cases in this document are the result
         of discussion within the Media Pipeline Task Force of the Web
-        and TV Interest Group.
-
-        This document proposes some additions to the HTML5
-        specification so that user agents can make bandwidth
+        and TV Interest Group.  This document proposes additions to
+        the HTML5 specification so that user agents can make bandwidth
         measurements and control adaptive streaming using a set of
         APIs in an interoperable way.