Fixes based on NTR comments
authorIan Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
Mon, 27 Jul 2015 09:53:45 -0500
changeset 921 6ffe3c2d0bef
parent 563 a063adb5a0ef
child 922 e3eb0bbccdb3
child 923 a9f7b3115b0a
Fixes based on NTR comments

- change “interactions with payment schemes” to “between user agent and
web app”
- Fix payment scheme text around regulation to make clear that payment
schemes are not people.
latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html
--- a/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Sun Jul 26 23:12:07 2015 -0400
+++ b/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Mon Jul 27 09:53:45 2015 -0500
@@ -142,13 +142,10 @@
 	<p>To reduce this fragmentation, the Working Group will focus
 primarily on standardization of a set of messages and a message flow
 for the initiation, confirmation, and completion of a payment. The
-	  scope of the charter focuses on the interactions between
-<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2015/WD-web-payments-use-cases-20150416/#dfn-payment-scheme">payment schemes</a>
- and the user agent and Web application, as well as the
-external actors that will interface directly with them.  This will
+	  scope of the charter focuses on the interactions
+	  between payer user agent and payee Web application. This will
 increase interoperability between payer and payee systems (for
-existing and future payment schemes), and encourage greater automation
-of the steps in a typical payment.</p>
+existing and future <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2015/WD-web-payments-use-cases-20150416/#dfn-payment-scheme">payment schemes</a>), and encourage greater automation of the steps in a typical payment.</p>
 
 	<p>By focusing on the message format and flow, the group
 leaves open the standardization of the delivery mechanism for these
@@ -300,7 +297,7 @@
 
 	   <h3>Relation to Regulatory Requirements</h3>
 
-	<p>Payment schemes manage their own regulatory obligations. The deliverables of this group should not prevent them from doing so.</p>
+	<p>Payment schemes define how various parties meet relevant regulatory obligations. The deliverables of this group should not prevent parties from meeting those obligations.</p>
 	
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