Include 'First Public Working Draft' in the status section
authorMark Watson <watsonm@netflix.com>
Thu, 20 Dec 2012 09:56:06 -0800
changeset 9 ce7ef0569838
parent 8 b0e3ce5a6465
child 10 440cee6b9ab3
Include 'First Public Working Draft' in the status section
Overview.html
keydiscovery-source.html
--- a/Overview.html	Thu Dec 20 09:51:18 2012 -0800
+++ b/Overview.html	Thu Dec 20 09:56:06 2012 -0800
@@ -474,11 +474,11 @@
           index</a> at http://www.w3.org/TR/.</em>
         </p>
         
-      <p>This document describes APIs that provide access to named pre-provisioned origin-specific keys.
+      <p>This document is the First Public Working Draft of the WebCrypto Key Discovery recommendation. It defines an API that provide access to named pre-provisioned origin-specific keys.
       Such keys were previously accessible through the KeyStorage API of the main WebCrypto API [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-WEBCRYPTO">WEBCRYPTO</a></cite>].
       The KeySotrage API has now been removed in favour of existing web storage mechanisms (for generated, derived and imported keys) and
       this specification for named origin-specific pre-provisioned keys. The privacy issues associated with such keys require special attention and
-      the material in this document has not yet received thorough review by the community. It is an open issue in the
+      the privacy related material in this document has not yet received thorough review by the community. It is an open issue in the
       Web Cryptography Working Group whether the scope of this document may be expanded to discovery of other kinds of key.</p>
     
         <p>
--- a/keydiscovery-source.html	Thu Dec 20 09:51:18 2012 -0800
+++ b/keydiscovery-source.html	Thu Dec 20 09:56:06 2012 -0800
@@ -71,11 +71,11 @@
     </section>
     
     <section id="sotd">
-      <p>This document describes APIs that provide access to named pre-provisioned origin-specific keys.
+      <p>This document is the First Public Working Draft of the WebCrypto Key Discovery recommendation. It defines an API that provide access to named pre-provisioned origin-specific keys.
       Such keys were previously accessible through the KeyStorage API of the main WebCrypto API [[WEBCRYPTO]].
       The KeySotrage API has now been removed in favour of existing web storage mechanisms (for generated, derived and imported keys) and
       this specification for named origin-specific pre-provisioned keys. The privacy issues associated with such keys require special attention and
-      the material in this document has not yet received thorough review by the community. It is an open issue in the
+      the privacy related material in this document has not yet received thorough review by the community. It is an open issue in the
       Web Cryptography Working Group whether the scope of this document may be expanded to discovery of other kinds of key.</p>
     </section>