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           index</a> at http://www.w3.org/TR/.</em>
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-      <p>This document is the First Public Working Draft of the WebCrypto Key Discovery recommendation. It defines an API that provide access to named pre-provisioned origin-specific keys.
-      Such keys were previously accessible through the KeyStorage API of the main WebCrypto API [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-WEBCRYPTO">WEBCRYPTO</a></cite>].
-      The KeySotrage API has now been removed in favour of existing web storage mechanisms (for generated, derived and imported keys) and
-      this specification for named origin-specific pre-provisioned keys. The privacy issues associated with such keys require special attention and
+      <p>This document is the First Public Working Draft of the WebCrypto Key Discovery recommendation. It defines an API that provides access to named origin-specific pre-provisioned keys.
+      Such keys were previously accessible through the KeyStorage API of the main WebCrypto API, which provided for both key storage and key
+      discovery. The KeyStorage API has been removed in favour of using
+      existing web storage mechanisms for key storage and this specification
+      for named origin-specific
+      pre-provisioned key discovery. The privacy issues associated with such keys require special attention and
       the privacy related material in this document has not yet received thorough review by the community. It is an open issue in the
       Web Cryptography Working Group whether the scope of this document may be expanded to discovery of other kinds of key.</p>
     
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 <section id="references" class="appendix"><!--OddPage--><h2><span class="secno">A. </span>References</h2><section id="normative-references"><h3><span class="secno">A.1 </span>Normative references</h3><dl class="bibliography"><dt id="bib-HTML5">[HTML5]</dt><dd>Ian Hickson; David Hyatt. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html5"><cite>HTML5.</cite></a> 29 March 2012. W3C Working Draft. (Work in progress.) URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html5">http://www.w3.org/TR/html5</a> 
 </dd><dt id="bib-RFC2119">[RFC2119]</dt><dd>S. Bradner. <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels.</cite></a> March 1997. Internet RFC 2119.  URL: <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt">http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt</a> 
-</dd><dt id="bib-WEBCRYPTO">[WEBCRYPTO]</dt><dd>Ryan Sleevi, David Dahl. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/WebCryptoAPI/"><cite>Web Cryptography API.</cite></a> W3C Working Draft (Work in progress.) URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-WebCryptoAPI-20120913/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-WebCryptoAPI-20120913/</a> 
+</dd><dt id="bib-WEBCRYPTO">[WEBCRYPTO]</dt><dd>Ryan Sleevi, David Dahl. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/WebCryptoAPI/"><cite>Web Cryptography API.</cite></a> W3C Working Draft (Work in progress.) URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/WebCryptoAPI/">http://www.w3.org/TR/WebCryptoAPI/</a> 
 </dd><dt id="bib-WEBIDL">[WEBIDL]</dt><dd>Cameron McCormack. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-WebIDL-20110927/"><cite>Web IDL.</cite></a> 27 September 2011. W3C Working Draft. (Work in progress.) URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-WebIDL-20110927/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-WebIDL-20110927/</a> 
 </dd><dt id="bib-WEBWORKERS">[WEBWORKERS]</dt><dd>Ian Hickson. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-workers-20110901/"><cite>Web Workers.</cite></a> 1 September 2011. W3C Working Draft. (Work in progress.) URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-workers-20110901/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-workers-20110901/</a> 
 </dd></dl></section><section id="informative-references"><h3><span class="secno">A.2 </span>Informative references</h3><dl class="bibliography"><dt id="bib-COOKIES">[COOKIES]</dt><dd>Adam Barth. <cite><a href="http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc6265.txt">HTTP State Management Mechanism</a>.</cite> April 2011. Internet Proposed Standard RFC 6265. URL: <a href="http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc6265.txt">http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc6265.txt</a> 

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+                            localBiblio : { "WEBCRYPTO" : "Ryan Sleevi, David Dahl. <a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/WebCryptoAPI/\"><cite>Web Cryptography API.</cite></a> W3C Working Draft (Work in progress.) URL: <a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/WebCryptoAPI/\">http://www.w3.org/TR/WebCryptoAPI/</a> "}
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-      <p>This document is the First Public Working Draft of the WebCrypto Key Discovery recommendation. It defines an API that provide access to named pre-provisioned origin-specific keys.
-      Such keys were previously accessible through the KeyStorage API of the main WebCrypto API [[WEBCRYPTO]].
-      The KeySotrage API has now been removed in favour of existing web storage mechanisms (for generated, derived and imported keys) and
-      this specification for named origin-specific pre-provisioned keys. The privacy issues associated with such keys require special attention and
+      <p>This document is the First Public Working Draft of the WebCrypto Key Discovery recommendation. It defines an API that provides access to named origin-specific pre-provisioned keys.
+      Such keys were previously accessible through the KeyStorage API of the main WebCrypto API, which provided for both key storage and key
+      discovery. The KeyStorage API has been removed in favour of using
+      existing web storage mechanisms for key storage and this specification
+      for named origin-specific
+      pre-provisioned key discovery. The privacy issues associated with such keys require special attention and
       the privacy related material in this document has not yet received thorough review by the community. It is an open issue in the
       Web Cryptography Working Group whether the scope of this document may be expanded to discovery of other kinds of key.</p>
     </section>