[imsc] Editorial edits per 20141113
authorpal@sandflow.org
Thu, 13 Nov 2014 07:46:54 -0800
changeset 758 0ddffaf8004c
parent 756 dc202b8b3ee8
child 759 2ad594ff71d9
[imsc] Editorial edits per 20141113
ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html
ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html
--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html	Thu Nov 06 08:10:54 2014 -0800
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html	Thu Nov 13 07:46:54 2014 -0800
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@
   </p>
   <h1 class="title p-name" id="title" property="dcterms:title">TTML Text and Image Profiles for Internet Media Subtitles and Captions 1.0</h1>
   
-  <h2 property="dcterms:issued" datatype="xsd:dateTime" content="2014-11-06T16:10:14.000Z" id="w3c-editor-s-draft-06-november-2014"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> Editor's Draft <time class="dt-published" datetime="2014-11-06">06 November 2014</time></h2>
+  <h2 property="dcterms:issued" datatype="xsd:dateTime" content="2014-11-13T15:41:04.000Z" id="w3c-editor-s-draft-13-november-2014"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> Editor's Draft <time class="dt-published" datetime="2014-11-13">13 November 2014</time></h2>
   <dl>
     
       <dt>This version:</dt>
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@
 	  <section id="conventions" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#conventions" rel="bibo:Chapter">
     <!--OddPage--><h2 role="heading" id="h2_conventions"><span class="secno">2. </span>Documentation Conventions</h2>
 
-    <p>This specification uses the same convention as [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-ttaf1-dfxp">ttaf1-dfxp</a></cite>] for the specification of parameter attributes, styling attributes and metadata elements.</p>
+    <p>This specification uses the same conventions as [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-ttaf1-dfxp">ttaf1-dfxp</a></cite>] for the specification of parameter attributes, styling attributes and metadata elements. In particular, Section 2.3 of [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-ttaf1-dfxp">ttaf1-dfxp</a></cite>] for conventions used in the XML representation of elements.</p>
 		
 		<p>All content of this specification that is not explicitly marked as non-normative is considered to be normative. If a section or appendix header contains the expression "non-normative", then the entirety of the section or appendix is considered non-normative.</p>
   </section>
@@ -856,9 +856,9 @@
         <p><code>itts:forcedDisplay</code> allows the processor to override the computed value of <code>tts:visibility</code>
         attribute in conjunction with an application parameter <code>displayForcedOnlyMode</code>.</p>
 
-        <p>If the value of <code>displayForcedOnlyMode</code> is "true", a content element with a <code>itts:forcedDisplay</code>
+        <p>If and only if the value of <code>displayForcedOnlyMode</code> is "true", a content element with a <code>itts:forcedDisplay</code>
         computed value of "false" <em class="rfc2119" title="SHALL NOT">SHALL NOT</em> produce any visible rendering, but still affect layout, regardless of the computed
-        value of <code>tts:visibility</code>. All other combinations of <code>displayForcedOnlyMode</code> and <code>itts:forcedDisplay</code> values have no impact on presentation.</p>
+        value of <code>tts:visibility</code>.</p>
 
         <p>The <code>itts:forcedDisplay</code> attribute shall conform to the following:</p>
 
@@ -1533,7 +1533,7 @@
 
       <p>When processing glyphs that match the combinations of computed font family and code point listed in <a href="#reference-fonts" class="sec-ref"><span class="secno">A.</span> <span class="sec-title">Reference Fonts</span></a>, e.g. during layout, a <a href="#dfn-presentation-processor" class="internalDFN">presentation processor</a> or <a href="#dfn-transformation-processor" class="internalDFN">transformation processor</a> <em class="rfc2119" title="SHALL">SHALL</em> use glyph metrics equal to the metrics of the specified reference font, unless the glyph is not defined by the reference font.</p>
 			
-			<div class="note"><div class="note-title" aria-level="2" role="heading" id="h_note_14"><span>Note</span></div><p class="">Implementations can use use fonts other than those specified in <a href="#reference-fonts" class="sec-ref"><span class="secno">A.</span> <span class="sec-title">Reference Fonts</span></a>. Two fonts with equal metrics can have a different appearance, but flow identically.</p></div>
+			<div class="note"><div class="note-title" aria-level="2" role="heading" id="h_note_14"><span>Note</span></div><p class="">Implementations can use fonts other than those specified in <a href="#reference-fonts" class="sec-ref"><span class="secno">A.</span> <span class="sec-title">Reference Fonts</span></a>. Two fonts with equal metrics can have a different appearance, but flow identically.</p></div>
 			
     </section>
 
@@ -3102,7 +3102,7 @@
 <section id="references" class="appendix" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#references" rel="bibo:Chapter"><!--OddPage--><h2 role="heading" id="h2_references"><span class="secno">G. </span>References</h2><section id="normative-references" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#normative-references" rel="bibo:Chapter"><h3 role="heading" id="h3_normative-references"><span class="secno">G.1 </span>Normative references</h3><dl class="bibliography" about=""><dt id="bib-CLDR">[CLDR]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">Unicode Consortium. <a href="http://cldr.unicode.org">The Common Locale Data Repository Project</a>
 </dd><dt id="bib-EBU-TT-D">[EBU-TT-D]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">European Broadcasting Union (EBU). <a href="https://tech.ebu.ch/docs/tech/tech3380.pdf">Tech 3380, EBU-TT-D Subtitling Distribution Format Version 1.0</a>
 </dd><dt id="bib-MHP">[MHP]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">ETSI TS 101 812 V1.3.1, Digital Video Broadcasting (DVB); Multimedia Home
-</dd><dt id="bib-RFC2119">[RFC2119]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">S. Bradner. <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels</cite></a>. March 1997. Best Current Practice. URL: <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt">http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt</a>
+</dd><dt id="bib-RFC2119">[RFC2119]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">S. Bradner. <a href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2119"><cite>Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels</cite></a>. March 1997. Best Current Practice. URL: <a href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2119">https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2119</a>
 </dd><dt id="bib-ST2052-1">[ST2052-1]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">SMPTE ST 2052-1, Timed Text Format (SMPTE-TT) URL: <a href="https://www.smpte.org/standards ">https://www.smpte.org/standards</a>
 </dd><dt id="bib-TTML1">[TTML1]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">Glenn Adams. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml1/"><cite>Timed Text Markup Language 1 (TTML1) (Second Edition)</cite></a>. 24 September 2013. W3C Recommendation. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml1/">http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml1/</a>
 </dd><dt id="bib-UNICODE">[UNICODE]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires"><a href="http://www.unicode.org/versions/latest/"><cite>The Unicode Standard</cite></a>. URL: <a href="http://www.unicode.org/versions/latest/">http://www.unicode.org/versions/latest/</a>
--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html	Thu Nov 06 08:10:54 2014 -0800
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html	Thu Nov 13 07:46:54 2014 -0800
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 	  <section id='conventions'>
     <h2>Documentation Conventions</h2>
 
-    <p>This specification uses the same convention as [[!ttaf1-dfxp]] for the specification of parameter attributes, styling attributes and metadata elements.</p>
+    <p>This specification uses the same conventions as [[!ttaf1-dfxp]] for the specification of parameter attributes, styling attributes and metadata elements. In particular, Section 2.3 of [[!ttaf1-dfxp]] for conventions used in the XML representation of elements.</p>
 		
 		<p>All content of this specification that is not explicitly marked as non-normative is considered to be normative. If a section or appendix header contains the expression "non-normative", then the entirety of the section or appendix is considered non-normative.</p>
   </section>
@@ -566,9 +566,9 @@
         <p><code>itts:forcedDisplay</code> allows the processor to override the computed value of <code>tts:visibility</code>
         attribute in conjunction with an application parameter <code>displayForcedOnlyMode</code>.</p>
 
-        <p>If the value of <code>displayForcedOnlyMode</code> is "true", a content element with a <code>itts:forcedDisplay</code>
+        <p>If and only if the value of <code>displayForcedOnlyMode</code> is "true", a content element with a <code>itts:forcedDisplay</code>
         computed value of "false" SHALL NOT produce any visible rendering, but still affect layout, regardless of the computed
-        value of <code>tts:visibility</code>. All other combinations of <code>displayForcedOnlyMode</code> and <code>itts:forcedDisplay</code> values have no impact on presentation.</p>
+        value of <code>tts:visibility</code>.</p>
 
         <p>The <code>itts:forcedDisplay</code> attribute shall conform to the following:</p>
 
@@ -1251,7 +1251,7 @@
 
       <p>When processing glyphs that match the combinations of computed font family and code point listed in <a href="#reference-fonts"></a>, e.g. during layout, a <a>presentation processor</a> or <a>transformation processor</a> SHALL use glyph metrics equal to the metrics of the specified reference font, unless the glyph is not defined by the reference font.</p>
 			
-			<p class="note">Implementations can use use fonts other than those specified in <a href="#reference-fonts"></a>. Two fonts with equal metrics can have a different appearance, but flow identically.</p>
+			<p class="note">Implementations can use fonts other than those specified in <a href="#reference-fonts"></a>. Two fonts with equal metrics can have a different appearance, but flow identically.</p>
 			
     </section>