rephrasing provo
authorTim L <lebot@rpi.edu>
Thu, 29 Mar 2012 16:59:32 -0400
changeset 2112 13b97d6817d7
parent 2111 e0bce4b9d3cb
child 2113 ea1cc5612bd8
rephrasing provo
ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html
ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-qualified-terms.inc.html
ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-starting-points.inc.html
--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Thu Mar 29 16:53:15 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Thu Mar 29 16:59:32 2012 -0400
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-     <section>
+     <section id="description-expanded-terms">
 	  	<h3>Expanded Terms</h3>
         <p>        
 This section presents the rest of classes and properties textually without using a diagram. We may use some examples in English. 
--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-qualified-terms.inc.html	Thu Mar 29 16:53:15 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-qualified-terms.inc.html	Thu Mar 29 16:59:32 2012 -0400
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-     <section>
+     <section id="description-qualified-terms">
 	  	<h3>Qualified Terms</h3>
         <p>        
 This section shows how qualified relationships in prov-dm are encoded in provo. We need two diagrams: one to show the hierarchical relationship between involvement classes, and another to using Association as an exemplar to illustrate the general pattern to qualify a binary relationship. 
--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-starting-points.inc.html	Thu Mar 29 16:53:15 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-starting-points.inc.html	Thu Mar 29 16:59:32 2012 -0400
@@ -23,15 +23,13 @@
          <a href="#Entity">prov:Entity</a>: Entities are things that one wants to provide provenance for. 
          </li>
          <li>
-         <a href="#Activity">prov:Activity</a>: Entities are acted upon using activities. An activity is 
+         <a href="#Activity">prov:Activity</a>: Activities act upon Entities. An activity is 
          characterized by a start and end time. It may use one or more entities, 
          and may generate one or more entities.
          </li>
          <li>
-         <a href="#Agent">prov:Agent</a>: An agent is a sub-class of Entity that is associated with an 
-         activity. An agent bears some form of responsibility for the activity 
-         taking place. Note also that an agent may act on behalf of another 
-         agent.
+         <a href="#Agent">prov:Agent</a>: An agent is a kind of Entity that bears some form of responsibility for an activity 
+         taking place. The agent may act on behalf of another agent.
          </li>
          </ul>