ISSUE-495
authorLuc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Mon, 22 Oct 2012 12:14:42 +0100
changeset 4542 7965e01a1bb3
parent 4541 f85763972191
child 4544 00b0a04d7c34
ISSUE-495
model/diff.html
model/prov-dm.html
--- a/model/diff.html	Fri Oct 19 15:40:16 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/diff.html	Mon Oct 22 12:14:42 2012 +0100
@@ -1026,7 +1026,7 @@
 pre.sh_sourceCode .sh_attribute { color: #006400; }
 
 </style><link href="./extra-dm.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8"><link href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-ED" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8"></head> 
-  <body style="display: inherit; "><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img width="72" height="48" src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">PROV-DM: The PROV Data Model</h1><h2 id="subtitle"><a href="diff.html"><span class="insert">Changes</span></a><span class="insert"> since LC release</span></h2><h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-19-october-2012"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> <span class="delete">Working</span><span class="insert">Editor's</span> Draft <span class="delete">24 July</span><span class="insert">19 October</span> 2012</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html"><span class="insert">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</span></a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</a></dd><dt>Previous version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120503/</span><span class="delete"> (</span><span class="delete">color-coded diffs</span><span class="delete">)</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span></a></dd><dt>Editors:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm/">Luc Moreau</a>, University of Southampton</dd>
+  <body style="display: inherit; "><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img width="72" height="48" src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">PROV-DM: The PROV Data Model</h1><h2 id="subtitle"><a href="diff.html"><span class="insert">Changes</span></a><span class="insert"> since LC release</span></h2><h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-22-october-2012"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> <span class="delete">Working</span><span class="insert">Editor's</span> Draft <span class="delete">24 July</span><span class="insert">22 October</span> 2012</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html"><span class="insert">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</span></a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</a></dd><dt>Previous version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120503/</span><span class="delete"> (</span><span class="delete">color-coded diffs</span><span class="delete">)</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span></a></dd><dt>Editors:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm/">Luc Moreau</a>, University of Southampton</dd>
 <dd><a href="http://www.cs.ncl.ac.uk/people/Paolo.Missier">Paolo Missier</a>, Newcastle University</dd>
 <dt><span class="delete">Contributors:</span><span class="insert">Authors:</span></dt><dd><a href="http://semanticweb.org/wiki/Khalid_Belhajjame">Khalid Belhajjame</a>, University of Manchester</dd>
 <dd><span>Reza B'Far</span>, Oracle Corporation</dd>
@@ -1653,6 +1653,12 @@
 <p><a class="section-ref" href="#core-structures"><span>Section 2.1</span></a> shows that seven concepts are mapped to binary relations in the core of PROV.  However, some advanced uses of these concepts cannot be captured by a binary relation, but require relations to be expanded to n-ary relations.</p>
 
 
+
+
+<p><span class="insert">Indeed, binary relations are actually shorthands that can be 'opened up' by applications and filled in with further application details. For example, derivation is a very high level relationship between two entities: an application may decide to 'open up' that relationship in an expanded relation that describes how an entity was derived from another by virtue of listing the generation, usage, and activity involved in the 'WasDerivedFrom' relationship. Applications are free to decide which level of granularity they want describe, and   PROV gives them the way to do that.</span></p>
+
+
+
 <p>To illustrate expanded relations, we consider the concept of
 association, described
 in <a class="section-ref" href="#section-agents-attribution-association-delegation"><span>Section 2.1.3</span></a>.  Agents may <span class="delete">adopt</span><span class="insert">rely on</span> <em>plans</em>, i.e.  sets of actions or steps, to achieve their
@@ -1829,19 +1835,21 @@
 <div class="anexample" id="anexample-prov-n"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">15</span><span class="insert">16</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-prov-n"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
 An activity with identifier <span class="name">a1</span> and an attribute <span class="name">type</span> with value <span class="name">createFile</span>.
-</p><pre class="codeexample">activity(a1, [prov:type="createFile"])
+</p><pre class="codeexample">activity(a1, <span class="delete">[prov:type="createFile"])</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type="createFile" ])</span>
 </pre>
 Two entities with identifiers <span class="name">e1</span> and <span class="name">e2</span>.
 <pre class="codeexample">entity(e1)
 entity(e2)
 </pre>
 The activity  <span class="name">a1</span> used  <span class="name">e1</span>, and <span class="name">e2</span> was generated by <span class="name">a1</span>.
-<pre class="codeexample">used(a1,e1)
-wasGeneratedBy(e2,a1)
+<pre class="codeexample"><span class="delete">used(a1,e1)
+wasGeneratedBy(e2,a1)</span><span class="insert">used(a1, e1)
+wasGeneratedBy(e2, a1)</span>
 </pre>
 The same descriptions, but with an explicit identifier <span class="name">u1</span> for the usage, and the syntactic marker '<span class="name">-</span>' to mark the absence of identifier in the generation. Both are followed by  '<span class="name">;</span>'.
-<pre class="codeexample">used(u1;a1,e1)
-wasGeneratedBy(-;e2,a1)
+<pre class="codeexample"><span class="delete">used(u1;a1,e1)
+wasGeneratedBy(-;e2,a1)</span><span class="insert">used(u1; a1, e1)
+wasGeneratedBy(-; e2, a1)</span>
 </pre>
 </div>
 
@@ -1897,11 +1905,11 @@
 </li>
 
 <li>There was an editing activity.
-<pre>activity(ex:edit1,[prov:type="edit"])
+<pre><span class="delete">activity(ex:edit1,[prov:type="edit"])</span><span class="insert">activity(ex:edit1, [ prov:type="edit" ])</span>
 </pre>
 </li>
 
-<li>The document was generated by the editing activity: this was a <a title="concept-generation">Generation</a>.
+<li>The document was generated by the editing activity: this was a <a title="concept-generation">Generation</a>.<span class="insert"> Its time is not specified, hence, the marker '-'.</span>
 <pre>wasGeneratedBy(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215, ex:edit1, -)
 </pre>
 </li>
@@ -1913,7 +1921,7 @@
 </pre>
 </li>
 
-<li>Agents were assigned various responsibilities in the editing activity: contributor and editor.
+<li>Agents were assigned various responsibilities in the editing activity: contributor and editor.<span class="insert"> The plan the agent relied upon is not specified, hence, the marker '-'.</span>
 <pre>wasAssociatedWith(ex:edit1, ex:Paolo, -, [ prov:role="editor" ])
 wasAssociatedWith(ex:edit1, ex:Simon, -, [ prov:role="contributor" ])
 </pre>
@@ -1983,11 +1991,11 @@
 </pre>
 </li>
 <li>There was a publication activity.
-<pre>activity(ex:act2,[prov:type="publish"])
+<pre><span class="delete">activity(ex:act2,[prov:type="publish"])</span><span class="insert">activity(ex:act2, [ prov:type="publish" ])</span>
 </pre>
 </li>
 
-<li>The document was generated by the publication activity: this was a <a title="concept-Generation">Generation</a>.
+<li>The document was generated by the publication activity: this was a <a title="concept-Generation">Generation</a>.<span class="insert"> Its time is not specified, hence, the marker '-'.</span>
 <pre>wasGeneratedBy(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215, ex:act2, -)
 </pre>
 </li>
@@ -1998,7 +2006,7 @@
 </pre>
 </li>
 
-<li>The activity required a publication request: this was a <a title="concept-Usage">Usage</a>.
+<li>The activity required a publication request: this was a <a title="concept-Usage">Usage</a>.<span class="insert"> Its time is not specified, hence, the marker '-'.</span>
 <pre>used(ex:act2, email:2011Dec/0111, -)
 </pre>
 </li>
@@ -2053,10 +2061,10 @@
 
 <p>To express their respective provenance, these bundles must be seen as entities, and all PROV constructs are now available to express their provenance. In the example below, <span class="name">ex:author-view</span> is attributed to the agent  <span class="name">ex:Simon</span>, whereas <span class="name">ex:process-view</span> to  <span class="name">w3:Consortium</span>.
 
-</p><pre class="codeexample">entity(ex:author-view, [prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
+</p><pre class="codeexample">entity(ex:author-view, <span class="delete">[prov:type='prov:Bundle'</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type='prov:Bundle'</span> ])
 wasAttributedTo(ex:author-view, ex:Simon)
 
-entity(ex:process-view, [prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
+entity(ex:process-view, <span class="delete">[prov:type='prov:Bundle'</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type='prov:Bundle'</span> ])
 wasAttributedTo(ex:process-view, w3:Consortium)
 </pre>
 
@@ -2276,7 +2284,7 @@
 <div class="anexample" id="anexample-activity"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">17</span><span class="insert">18</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-activity"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
 The following expression</p>
-<pre class="codeexample">activity(a1,2011-11-16T16:05:00,2011-11-16T16:06:00,
+<pre class="codeexample"><span class="delete">activity(a1,2011-11-16T16:05:00,2011-11-16T16:06:00,</span><span class="insert">activity(a1, 2011-11-16T16:05:00, 2011-11-16T16:06:00,</span>
         [ ex:host="server.example.org", prov:type='ex:edit' ])
 </pre>
 <p>states the existence of an activity with identifier <span class="name">a1</span>, start time <span class="name">2011-11-16T16:05:00</span>, and end time <span class="name">2011-11-16T16:06:00</span>, running on host <span class="name">server.example.org</span>, and of type <span class="name">edit</span>.  The attribute <span class="name">host</span>  is application specific  (declared in some namespace with prefix <span class="name">ex</span>).  The attribute <span class="name">type</span> is a reserved attribute of PROV-DM, allowing for sub-typing to be expressed  (see <a href="#term-attribute-type">Section 5.7.4.4</a>).</p>
@@ -3208,7 +3216,7 @@
 
 
 <p>
-A  bundle description is of the form <span class="pnExpression">entity(id,[prov:type='prov:Bundle', attr1=val1, ...])</span>
+A  bundle description is of the form <span class="pnExpression"><span class="delete">entity(id,[prov:type='prov:Bundle',</span><span class="insert">entity(id, [ prov:type='prov:Bundle',</span> attr1=val1, <span class="delete">...])</span><span class="insert">...] )</span></span>
 where <span class="name">id</span> is  an identifier denoting a bundle,
  a type <span>prov:Bundle</span> and
 an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> set of attribute-value  pairs ((<span class="name">attr1</span>, <span class="name">val1</span>), ...) representing additional information about this bundle.
@@ -3253,7 +3261,7 @@
 
 <p>The first bundle contains the descriptions corresponding to  Bob observing the creation of <span class="name">ex:report1</span>. Its provenance can be described as follows.</p>
 <pre class="codeexample"> 
-entity(bob:bundle1, [prov:type='prov:Bundle'])
+entity(bob:bundle1, <span class="delete">[prov:type='prov:Bundle'])</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])</span>
 wasGeneratedBy(bob:bundle1, -, 2012-05-24T10:30:00)
 wasAttributedTo(bob:bundle1, ex:Bob)
 </pre>
@@ -3408,7 +3416,7 @@
 Considering again the two versions of the technical report <span class="name"><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-prov-dm-20111215">tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215</a></span> (second working draft) and <span class="name"><span class="name"><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-prov-dm-20111018">tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018</a></span></span> (first working draft). They are alternate of each other.
 </p><pre class="codeexample">entity(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018)
 entity(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215)
-alternateOf(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018,tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215)
+<span class="delete">alternateOf(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018,tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215)</span><span class="insert">alternateOf(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018, tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215)</span>
 </pre>
 <p>They are both specialization of the page <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a>.</p>
 </div>
@@ -3496,10 +3504,10 @@
 <p>Consider the following bundle of descriptions, in which derivation and generations have been identified.
 </p><pre class="codeexample"> 
 bundle obs:bundle1
-  entity(ex:report1, [prov:type="report", ex:version=1])
-  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g1; ex:report1,-,2012-05-24T10:00:01)
-  entity(ex:report2, [prov:type="report", ex:version=2])
-  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g2; ex:report2,-,2012-05-25T11:00:01)
+  entity(ex:report1, <span class="delete">[prov:type="report", ex:version=1])</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type="report", ex:version=1 ])</span>
+  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g1; <span class="delete">ex:report1,-,2012-05-24T10:00:01)</span><span class="insert">ex:report1, -, 2012-05-24T10:00:01)</span>
+  entity(ex:report2, <span class="delete">[prov:type="report", ex:version=2])</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type="report", ex:version=2 ])</span>
+  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g2; <span class="delete">ex:report2,-,2012-05-25T11:00:01)</span><span class="insert">ex:report2, -, 2012-05-25T11:00:01)</span>
   wasDerivedFrom(ex:report2, ex:report1)
 endBundle
 entity(obs:bundle1, [ prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
@@ -3511,10 +3519,10 @@
   entity(tool:bundle2, [ prov:type='viz:Configuration', prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
   wasAttributedTo(tool:bundle2, viz:Visualizer)
 
-  entity(tool:report1, [viz:color="orange"])
+  entity(tool:report1, <span class="delete">[viz:color="orange"])</span><span class="insert">[ viz:color="orange" ])</span>
   mentionOf(tool:report1, ex:report1, obs:bundle1)
 
-  entity(tool:report2, [viz:color="blue"])              
+  entity(tool:report2, <span class="delete">[viz:color="blue"])</span><span class="insert">[ viz:color="blue" ])</span>              
   mentionOf(tool:report2, ex:report2, obs:bundle1)
 endBundle
 </pre>
@@ -3585,8 +3593,8 @@
 <p><span class="insert">PROV defines no collection-specific attributes.</span></p>
 
 <div class="anexample" id="example_48"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">47</span><span class="insert">48</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_48"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
-<pre class="codeexample">entity(c0, [prov:type='prov:EmptyCollection' ])  // c0 is an empty collection
-entity(c1, [prov:type='prov:Collection'  ])      // c1 is a collection, with unknown content
+<pre class="codeexample">entity(c0, <span class="delete">[prov:type='prov:EmptyCollection'</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type='prov:EmptyCollection'</span> ])  // c0 is an empty collection
+entity(c1, <span class="delete">[prov:type='prov:Collection'</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type='prov:Collection'</span>  ])      // c1 is a collection, with unknown content
 </pre>
 </div>
 
@@ -4298,6 +4306,7 @@
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/521"><span class="insert">ISSUE-521</span></a><span class="insert">: now states that "an agent relied on a plan" instead of "an agent adopted a plan".
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/499"><span class="insert">ISSUE-499</span></a><span class="insert">: Made explicit that generation/usage/invalidation/start/end are implicit.
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/449"><span class="insert">ISSUE-449</span></a><span class="insert">: Clarified definition of prov:value attribute and added an example.
+</span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/495"><span class="insert">ISSUE-495</span></a><span class="insert">: added paragraph about 'relations opening up'. Clarified the role of '-' in example. Fixed dates in biblio. Fixed space issue in prov-n examples
 </span></li></ul>
 
 </div>
@@ -4384,11 +4393,11 @@
 </dd><dt id="bib-XMLSCHEMA11-2">[XMLSCHEMA11-2]</dt><dd>Henry S. Thompson; et al. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/REC-xmlschema11-2-20120405/"><cite>W3C XML Schema Definition Language (XSD) 1.1 Part 2: Datatypes.</cite></a> 5 April 2012. W3C Recommendation URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/REC-xmlschema11-2-20120405/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/REC-xmlschema11-2-20120405/</a> 
 </dd></dl></div><div id="informative-references" class="section"><h3><span class="secno"><span class="delete">C.2</span><span class="insert">D.2</span> </span>Informative references</h3><dl class="bibliography"><dt id="bib-Logic">[Logic]</dt><dd>W. E. Johnson <a href="http://www.ditext.com/johnson/intro-3.html"><cite>Logic: Part III</cite></a>.1924. URL: <a href="http://www.ditext.com/johnson/intro-3.html">http://www.ditext.com/johnson/intro-3.html</a>
 </dd><dt id="bib-Mappings">[Mappings]</dt><dd>Satya Sahoo and Paul Groth and Olaf Hartig and Simon Miles and Sam Coppens and James Myers and Yolanda Gil and Luc Moreau and Jun Zhao and Michael Panzer and Daniel Garijo <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/prov/wiki/Provenance_Vocabulary_Mappings"><cite>Provenance Vocabulary Mappings</cite></a>. August 2010 URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/prov/wiki/Provenance_Vocabulary_Mappings">http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/prov/wiki/Provenance_Vocabulary_Mappings</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-AQ">[PROV-AQ]</dt><dd>Graham Klyne and Paul Groth (eds.) Luc Moreau, Olaf Hartig, Yogesh Simmhan, James Meyers, Timothy Lebo, Khalid Belhajjame, and Simon Miles <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/"><cite>Provenance Access and Query</cite></a>. 2011, Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS">[PROV-CONSTRAINTS]</dt><dd>James Cheney, Paolo Missier, and Luc Moreau (eds.) <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/"><cite>Constraints of the PROV Data Model</cite></a>. 2011, Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-N">[PROV-N]</dt><dd>Luc Moreau and Paolo Missier (eds.) James Cheney, Stian Soiland-Reyes <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/"><cite>PROV-N: The Provenance Notation</cite></a>. 2011, Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-O">[PROV-O]</dt><dd>Timothy Lebo, Satya Sahoo and Deborah McGuinness (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, James Cheney, David Corsar, Daniel Garijo, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan Zednik <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/"><cite>Provenance Formal Model</cite></a>. 2011, Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-PRIMER">[PROV-PRIMER]</dt><dd>Yolanda Gil and Simon Miles (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, Helena Deus, Daniel Garijo, Graham Klyne, Paolo Missier, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan Zednik <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/"><cite>Prov Model Primer</cite></a>. 2011, Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/</a>
+</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-AQ">[PROV-AQ]</dt><dd>Graham Klyne and Paul Groth (eds.) Luc Moreau, Olaf Hartig, Yogesh Simmhan, James Meyers, Timothy Lebo, Khalid Belhajjame, and Simon Miles <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/"><cite>Provenance Access and Query</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/</a>
+</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS">[PROV-CONSTRAINTS]</dt><dd>James Cheney, Paolo Missier, and Luc Moreau (eds.) <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/"><cite>Constraints of the PROV Data Model</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/</a>
+</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-N">[PROV-N]</dt><dd>Luc Moreau and Paolo Missier (eds.) James Cheney, Stian Soiland-Reyes <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/"><cite>PROV-N: The Provenance Notation</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/</a>
+</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-O">[PROV-O]</dt><dd>Timothy Lebo, Satya Sahoo and Deborah McGuinness (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, James Cheney, David Corsar, Daniel Garijo, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan Zednik <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/"><cite>Provenance Formal Model</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/</a>
+</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-PRIMER">[PROV-PRIMER]</dt><dd>Yolanda Gil and Simon Miles (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, Helena Deus, Daniel Garijo, Graham Klyne, Paolo Missier, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan Zednik <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/"><cite>Prov Model Primer</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/</a>
 </dd><dt id="bib-RDF-CONCEPTS11">[RDF-CONCEPTS11]</dt><dd>Richard Cyganiak and David Wood (eds.) RDF 1.1 Concepts and Abstract Syntax <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/"><cite>RDF 1.1 Concepts and Abstract Syntax</cite></a>. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/">http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/</a>
 </dd></dl></div></div></body></html>
 
--- a/model/prov-dm.html	Fri Oct 19 15:40:16 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/prov-dm.html	Mon Oct 22 12:14:42 2012 +0100
@@ -325,32 +325,32 @@
         "PROV-PRIMER":
           "Yolanda Gil and Simon Miles (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, Helena Deus, Daniel Garijo, Graham Klyne, Paolo Missier, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan Zednik "+
           "<a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/\"><cite>Prov Model Primer</cite></a>. "+
-          "2011, Working Draft. "+
+          "2012, Working Draft. "+
           "URL: <a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/\">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/</a>",
 
         "PROV-O":
           "Timothy Lebo, Satya Sahoo and Deborah McGuinness (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, James Cheney, David Corsar, Daniel Garijo, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan Zednik "+
           "<a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/\"><cite>Provenance Formal Model</cite></a>. "+
-          "2011, Working Draft. "+
+          "2012, Working Draft. "+
           "URL: <a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/\">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/</a>",
 
 
         "PROV-CONSTRAINTS":
           "James Cheney, Paolo Missier, and Luc Moreau (eds.) "+
           "<a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/\"><cite>Constraints of the PROV Data Model</cite></a>. "+
-          "2011, Working Draft. "+
+          "2012, Working Draft. "+
           "URL: <a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/\">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/</a>",
 
         "PROV-N":
           "Luc Moreau and Paolo Missier (eds.) James Cheney, Stian Soiland-Reyes "+
           "<a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/\"><cite>PROV-N: The Provenance Notation</cite></a>. "+
-          "2011, Working Draft. "+
+          "2012, Working Draft. "+
           "URL: <a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/\">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/</a>",
 
         "PROV-AQ":
           "Graham Klyne and Paul Groth (eds.) Luc Moreau, Olaf Hartig, Yogesh Simmhan, James Meyers, Timothy Lebo, Khalid Belhajjame, and Simon Miles "+
           "<a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/\"><cite>Provenance Access and Query</cite></a>. "+
-          "2011, Working Draft. "+
+          "2012, Working Draft. "+
           "URL: <a href=\"http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/\">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/</a>",
 
         "UML":
@@ -1103,6 +1103,9 @@
 
 <p><a class="section-ref" href="#core-structures"><span>TBD</span></a> shows that seven concepts are mapped to binary relations in the core of PROV.  However, some advanced uses of these concepts cannot be captured by a binary relation, but require relations to be expanded to n-ary relations.</p>
 
+<p>Indeed, binary relations are actually shorthands that can be 'opened up' by applications and filled in with further application details. For example, derivation is a very high level relationship between two entities: an application may decide to 'open up' that relationship in an expanded relation that describes how an entity was derived from another by virtue of listing the generation, usage, and activity involved in the 'WasDerivedFrom' relationship. Applications are free to decide which level of granularity they want describe, and   PROV gives them the way to do that.</p>
+
+
 
 <p>To illustrate expanded relations, we consider the concept of
 association, described
@@ -1281,7 +1284,7 @@
 <p>
 An activity with identifier <span class="name">a1</span> and an attribute <span class="name">type</span> with value <span class="name">createFile</span>.
 <pre class="codeexample" >
-activity(a1, [prov:type="createFile"])
+activity(a1, [ prov:type="createFile" ])
 </pre>
 Two entities with identifiers <span class="name">e1</span> and <span class="name">e2</span>.
 <pre class="codeexample" >
@@ -1290,13 +1293,13 @@
 </pre>
 The activity  <span class="name">a1</span> used  <span class="name">e1</span>, and <span class="name">e2</span> was generated by <span class="name">a1</span>.
 <pre class="codeexample" >
-used(a1,e1)
-wasGeneratedBy(e2,a1)
+used(a1, e1)
+wasGeneratedBy(e2, a1)
 </pre>
 The same descriptions, but with an explicit identifier <span class="name">u1</span> for the usage, and the syntactic marker '<span class="name">-</span>' to mark the absence of identifier in the generation. Both are followed by  '<span class="name">;</span>'.
 <pre class="codeexample" >
-used(u1;a1,e1)
-wasGeneratedBy(-;e2,a1)
+used(u1; a1, e1)
+wasGeneratedBy(-; e2, a1)
 </pre>
 </div>
 
@@ -1354,11 +1357,11 @@
 
 <li>There was an editing activity.
 <pre>
-activity(ex:edit1,[prov:type="edit"])
+activity(ex:edit1, [ prov:type="edit" ])
 </pre>
 </li>
 
-<li>The document was generated by the editing activity: this was a <a title="concept-generation">Generation</a>.
+<li>The document was generated by the editing activity: this was a <a title="concept-generation">Generation</a>. Its time is not specified, hence, the marker '-'.
 <pre>
 wasGeneratedBy(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215, ex:edit1, -)
 </pre>
@@ -1372,7 +1375,7 @@
 </pre>
 </li>
 
-<li>Agents were assigned various responsibilities in the editing activity: contributor and editor.
+<li>Agents were assigned various responsibilities in the editing activity: contributor and editor. The plan the agent relied upon is not specified, hence, the marker '-'.
 <pre>
 wasAssociatedWith(ex:edit1, ex:Paolo, -, [ prov:role="editor" ])
 wasAssociatedWith(ex:edit1, ex:Simon, -, [ prov:role="contributor" ])
@@ -1445,11 +1448,11 @@
 </li>
 <li>There was a publication activity.
 <pre>
-activity(ex:act2,[prov:type="publish"])
+activity(ex:act2, [ prov:type="publish" ])
 </pre>
 </li>
 
-<li>The document was generated by the publication activity: this was a <a title="concept-Generation">Generation</a>.
+<li>The document was generated by the publication activity: this was a <a title="concept-Generation">Generation</a>. Its time is not specified, hence, the marker '-'.
 <pre>
 wasGeneratedBy(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215, ex:act2, -)
 </pre>
@@ -1462,7 +1465,7 @@
 </pre>
 </li>
 
-<li>The activity required a publication request: this was a <a title="concept-Usage">Usage</a>.
+<li>The activity required a publication request: this was a <a title="concept-Usage">Usage</a>. Its time is not specified, hence, the marker '-'.
 <pre>
 used(ex:act2, email:2011Dec/0111, -)
 </pre>
@@ -1522,10 +1525,10 @@
 <p>To express their respective provenance, these bundles must be seen as entities, and all PROV constructs are now available to express their provenance. In the example below, <span class="name">ex:author-view</span> is attributed to the agent  <span class="name">ex:Simon</span>, whereas <span class="name">ex:process-view</span> to  <span class="name">w3:Consortium</span>.
 
 <pre class="codeexample">
-entity(ex:author-view, [prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
+entity(ex:author-view, [ prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
 wasAttributedTo(ex:author-view, ex:Simon)
 
-entity(ex:process-view, [prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
+entity(ex:process-view, [ prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
 wasAttributedTo(ex:process-view, w3:Consortium)
 </pre>
 
@@ -1755,7 +1758,7 @@
 <p>
 The following expression</p>
 <pre class="codeexample">
-activity(a1,2011-11-16T16:05:00,2011-11-16T16:06:00,
+activity(a1, 2011-11-16T16:05:00, 2011-11-16T16:06:00,
         [ ex:host="server.example.org", prov:type='ex:edit' ])
 </pre>
 <p>states the existence of an activity with identifier <span class="name">a1</span>, start time <span class="name">2011-11-16T16:05:00</span>, and end time <span
@@ -2715,7 +2718,7 @@
 
 
 <p>
-A  bundle description is of the form <span class="pnExpression">entity(id,[prov:type='prov:Bundle', attr1=val1, ...])</span>
+A  bundle description is of the form <span class="pnExpression">entity(id, [ prov:type='prov:Bundle', attr1=val1, ...] )</span>
 where <span class='name'>id</span> is  an identifier denoting a bundle,
  a type <span>prov:Bundle</span> and
 an OPTIONAL set of attribute-value  pairs ((<span class="name">attr1</span>, <span class="name">val1</span>), ...) representing additional information about this bundle.
@@ -2760,7 +2763,7 @@
 
 <p>The first bundle contains the descriptions corresponding to  Bob observing the creation of <span class="name">ex:report1</span>. Its provenance can be described as follows.</p>
 <pre class="codeexample"> 
-entity(bob:bundle1, [prov:type='prov:Bundle'])
+entity(bob:bundle1, [ prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
 wasGeneratedBy(bob:bundle1, -, 2012-05-24T10:30:00)
 wasAttributedTo(bob:bundle1, ex:Bob)
 </pre>
@@ -2914,7 +2917,7 @@
 <pre class="codeexample">
 entity(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018)
 entity(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215)
-alternateOf(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018,tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215)
+alternateOf(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018, tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215)
 </pre>
 <p>They are both specialization of the page <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a>.</p>
 </div>
@@ -3004,10 +3007,10 @@
 <p>Consider the following bundle of descriptions, in which derivation and generations have been identified.
 <pre class="codeexample"> 
 bundle obs:bundle1
-  entity(ex:report1, [prov:type="report", ex:version=1])
-  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g1; ex:report1,-,2012-05-24T10:00:01)
-  entity(ex:report2, [prov:type="report", ex:version=2])
-  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g2; ex:report2,-,2012-05-25T11:00:01)
+  entity(ex:report1, [ prov:type="report", ex:version=1 ])
+  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g1; ex:report1, -, 2012-05-24T10:00:01)
+  entity(ex:report2, [ prov:type="report", ex:version=2 ])
+  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g2; ex:report2, -, 2012-05-25T11:00:01)
   wasDerivedFrom(ex:report2, ex:report1)
 endBundle
 entity(obs:bundle1, [ prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
@@ -3019,10 +3022,10 @@
   entity(tool:bundle2, [ prov:type='viz:Configuration', prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
   wasAttributedTo(tool:bundle2, viz:Visualizer)
 
-  entity(tool:report1, [viz:color="orange"])
+  entity(tool:report1, [ viz:color="orange" ])
   mentionOf(tool:report1, ex:report1, obs:bundle1)
 
-  entity(tool:report2, [viz:color="blue"])              
+  entity(tool:report2, [ viz:color="blue" ])              
   mentionOf(tool:report2, ex:report2, obs:bundle1)
 endBundle
 </pre>
@@ -3085,8 +3088,8 @@
 
 <div class="anexample">
 <pre class="codeexample">
-entity(c0, [prov:type='prov:EmptyCollection' ])  // c0 is an empty collection
-entity(c1, [prov:type='prov:Collection'  ])      // c1 is a collection, with unknown content
+entity(c0, [ prov:type='prov:EmptyCollection' ])  // c0 is an empty collection
+entity(c1, [ prov:type='prov:Collection'  ])      // c1 is a collection, with unknown content
 </pre>
 </div>
 
@@ -3885,6 +3888,7 @@
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/521">ISSUE-521</a>: now states that "an agent relied on a plan" instead of "an agent adopted a plan".
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/499">ISSUE-499</a>: Made explicit that generation/usage/invalidation/start/end are implicit.
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/449">ISSUE-449</a>: Clarified definition of prov:value attribute and added an example.
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/495">ISSUE-495</a>: added paragraph about 'relations opening up'. Clarified the role of '-' in example. Fixed dates in biblio. Fixed space issue in prov-n examples
 </ul>
 
 </section>