model/prov-dm.html
changeset 4478 0bbd5b38ab1b
parent 4470 47d79e48cb4c
child 4479 8aa16461de6e
--- a/model/prov-dm.html	Mon Sep 24 17:24:11 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/prov-dm.html	Tue Sep 25 11:36:20 2012 +0100
@@ -853,9 +853,22 @@
 publication of a new version of a document.
 </div>
 
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+<div class="anexample conceptexample" id="usage-example">
+<p>Usage examples include a procedure beginning to consume an argument, a service starting to read a value on a port, a program beginning to read a configuration
+file, or the point at which an ingredient, such as eggs, is being added in a baking activity. Usage may entirely consume an entity (e.g. eggs are no longer available after being added to
+the mix); in contrast, the same entity may be used multiple times, possibly by different activities (e.g. a file on a file system can be read indefinitely).
+</div>
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+<div class="anexample conceptexample" id="driving-a-car">
 <p>
-One might reasonably ask what entities are used and generated by
-driving a car from Boston to Cambridge.  This is answered by
+Let us consider the activity of driving a car from Boston to Cambridge.
+One might reasonably ask what entities are used and generated by this activity.
+This is answered by
 considering that a single artifact may
 correspond to several entities; in this case, a car in Boston may be a
 different entity from a car in Cambridge.  
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 of provenance allows descriptions of interactions between physical and
 digital artifacts.
 </p>
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-<div class="anexample conceptexample" id="usage-example">
-<p>Usage examples include a procedure beginning to consume an argument, a service starting to read a value on a port, a program beginning to read a configuration
-file, or the point at which an ingredient, such as eggs, is being added in a baking activity. Usage may entirely consume an entity (e.g. eggs are no longer available after being added to
-the mix); in contrast, the same entity may be used multiple times, possibly by different activities (e.g. a file on a file system can be read indefinitely).
 </div>
 
 
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 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/506">ISSUE-506</a>: Updated role from author to contributor, in line with text.
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/492">ISSUE-492</a>: Fixed typos in  <a href="#anexample-invalidation3" class="anexample-ref"><span>Example REF</span></a>.
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/508">ISSUE-508</a>: Clarified the bold names and parameters  in  text preceding <a href="#prov-dm-types-and-relations-fig">Table 5</a>.
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/501">ISSUE-501</a>: Put the example about driving a car to Boston in a box.
 </ul>
 
 </section>