Simple grammatical cleanup and improved wording
authorsspeiche
Tue, 18 Feb 2014 16:10:11 -0500
changeset 498 9ab1339e0013
parent 497 67f04abb73e6
child 499 f9882209a896
Simple grammatical cleanup and improved wording
ldp-paging.html
ldp.html
--- a/ldp-paging.html	Tue Feb 18 15:28:39 2014 -0500
+++ b/ldp-paging.html	Tue Feb 18 16:10:11 2014 -0500
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@
 <section id="terms">
 <h1>Terminology</h1>
 
-<p>Terminology is based on W3C's Architecture of the World Wide Web [[WEBARCH]] and Hyper-text Transfer Protocol [[HTTP11]].
+<p>Terminology is based on W3C's Architecture of the World Wide Web [[WEBARCH]], Hyper-text Transfer Protocol [[HTTP11]] and Linked Data Platform [[LDP]].
 </p>
   <dl class="glossary">	
 	<dt><dfn>Paged resource</dfn></dt>
--- a/ldp.html	Tue Feb 18 15:28:39 2014 -0500
+++ b/ldp.html	Tue Feb 18 16:10:11 2014 -0500
@@ -479,7 +479,8 @@
 	<p>The LDP Working Group proposes incorporation of the following clause to make LDP clients paging aware:</p>
 		<a title="LDP client">LDP clients</a> SHOULD 
 		be capable of processing successful HTTP <code>GET</code> responses formed by an LDP server
-		that independently initiated paged responses [[!LDP-PAGING]]
+		that independently initiated paging, returning a page of representation instead of full resource
+		representation [[!LDP-PAGING]].
 	</div></h2>
 	</section>