remove duplication of "document" in sentence. bblfish
authorHenry Story <henry.story@bblfish.net>
Sun, 01 Jun 2014 20:04:39 +0200
branchbblfish
changeset 617 4d613e39746b
parent 616 31561800c949
child 618 6ff8939ea487
remove duplication of "document" in sentence.
ldp-primer/ldp-primer.html
--- a/ldp-primer/ldp-primer.html	Sun Jun 01 19:46:53 2014 +0200
+++ b/ldp-primer/ldp-primer.html	Sun Jun 01 20:04:39 2014 +0200
@@ -342,7 +342,7 @@
     <p>
       Such servers do not impose any restriction on LDPRs and generally act as storage systems without any domain specific application logic and vocabularies.
     A client posting to such a container is not bound to any further consequences other than those that publishing that document may bind him to. 
- The first scenario in this document concerns a document storage system based on Basic Containers.
+ Our first scenario illustrates the use Basic Containers with a document storage system.
     </p>
     <p>
       A Direct Container allows to use some domain specific vocabulary to relate the resources of the hierarchy. The additional assertion is called the membership property.