ldp.html
changeset 112 41e5e59c1e26
parent 111 7b5387b10b06
child 113 6fd1ba20242d
--- a/ldp.html	Fri May 17 14:19:23 2013 -0400
+++ b/ldp.html	Fri May 17 14:34:55 2013 -0400
@@ -170,11 +170,11 @@
 	<dd>As defined by Tim Berners-Lee [[LINKED-DATA]].<p></p></dd>
 	
 	<dt><dfn>Linked Data Platform Resource</dfn> (<dfn><abbr title="Linked Data Platform Resource">LDPR</abbr></dfn>)</dt>
-	<dd>HTTP resource that conforms to the simple lifecycle
+	<dd>HTTP resource whose state is represented in RDF that conforms to the simple lifecycle
 		patterns and conventions in the <a href="#ldpr">LDPRs</a> section.<p></p></dd>
 		
 	<dt><dfn>Linked Data Platform Container</dfn> (<dfn><abbr title="Linked Data Platform Container">LDPC</abbr></dfn>)</dt>
-	<dd>An LDPR representing a collection of same-subject, same-predicate triples, which are uniquely identified by a URI
+	<dd>An LDPR representing a collection of same-subject, same-predicate triples which is uniquely identified by a URI
 	that responds to client requests for creation, modification, and enumeration of its members.
 	<p></p></dd>
 		
@@ -1274,7 +1274,8 @@
 </p>
 <blockquote><em><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-ldp-20130307/">Second Public Working Draft</a></em></blockquote>
 <ul>
-	<li>2013-05-15 - ISSUE-9 Moved section 4.1.7 out of spec to the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/Deployment_Guide#Servers_should_serve_up_canonical_URLs">deployment guide</a> (SS)</li>
+	<li>2013-05-17 - Tweaks to Terminology section for LDPR and LDPC (SS)</li>
+	<li>2013-05-17 - ISSUE-9 Moved section 4.1.7 out of spec to the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/Deployment_Guide#Servers_should_serve_up_canonical_URLs">deployment guide</a> (SS)</li>
 	<li>2013-05-15 - Updated wording for 5.2.2 from to be more clear (SS)</li>
 	<li>2013-05-13 - ISSUE-49 Moved section 4.1.4 out of spec to the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/Deployment_Guide#Predicate_URIs_SHOULD_be_HTTP_URLs">deployment guide</a>. (SS)</li>
 	<li>2013-05-08 - Removed closed issues 5, 7, 55 and 38 as the don't require edits. Added 64 and 65. (SS)</li>