--- a/ldp-ucr.html	Mon Jul 08 12:11:53 2013 +0100
+++ b/ldp-ucr.html	Mon Jul 08 12:33:33 2013 +0100
@@ -184,13 +184,12 @@
 		<li>What standard vocabularies should I use?</li>
 		<li>What primitive data types should I use?</li>
 	</ul>
-	<p>A good goal for the [[LINKED-DATA-PLATFORM]] would be
+	<p>The goal for the [[LINKED-DATA-PLATFORM]] is
 		to define a specification required to allow the definition of a
 		writable Linked Data API equivalent to the simple application APIs
 		that are often written on the web today using the Atom Publishing
-		Protocol (APP). APP shares some characteristics with Linked Data,
-		such as the use of HTTP and URLs. One difference is that Linked
-		Data relies on a flexible data model with RDF, which allows for
+		Protocol (APP), which shares some characteristics with Linked Data
+		such as the use of HTTP and URLs but relying on a flexible data model based on RDF, that allows for
 		multiple representations.</p>
 
 </section>