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     The Linked Data Protocol specifies how web applications can, using the HTTP protocol, find resources and follow links, publish new resources, edit and delete existing ones. 
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-      To construct clients and servers that read and write Linked Data resources, LDP specifies standard HTTP and RDF techniques and best practices that you should use, and anti-patterns you should avoid,  The Primer aims to provide introductory examples and guidance in the use of the LDP protocol. For a systematic account the reader should consult the normative LDP reference [[LDP]]. For an overview of the use cases for LDP and the elicited requirements that guided its design, the reader should consult the LDP Use Cases and Requirements [[LDP-UCR]] and for best practises and guidelines, the reader should consult the LDP LDP Best Practices and Guidelines document [[LDP-BP]].
+   The Primer aims to provide introductory examples and guidance in the use of the LDP protocol, in accordance with best practices. 
+  For a systematic description of the protocol the reader should consult the normative LDP reference [[LDP]]. 
+  For an overview of the use cases for LDP and the elicited requirements that guided its design, the reader should consult the LDP Use Cases and Requirements [[LDP-UCR]] and for best practises and guidelines, the reader should consult the LDP LDP Best Practices and Guidelines document [[LDP-BP]].
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     <b id="conventions">Conventions Used in This Document</b>