Better 3.3.5.2. ldpatch
authorAlexandre Bertails <alexandre@bertails.org>
Fri, 21 Nov 2014 14:44:54 -0500
branchldpatch
changeset 906 cd9627bc830e
parent 905 6ae283919a8a
child 907 02e57dda7d72
Better 3.3.5.2.
ldpatch.html
--- a/ldpatch.html	Fri Nov 21 14:31:23 2014 -0500
+++ b/ldpatch.html	Fri Nov 21 14:44:54 2014 -0500
@@ -646,17 +646,20 @@
             <h3>Example</h3>
 
             <p>
-                Here is an illustration of the <a href="#updatelist-algo">previously introduced algorithm</a>. Consider the graph represented in <a href="#fig-a-graph-containing-a-collection"></a>. <a href="#fig-updatelist-result"></a> shows the result of applying an <a>UpdateList</a> operation on that list.
+                Here is an illustration of the <a href="#updatelist-algo">previously introduced algorithm</a>.
+            </p>
+            <p>
+                Consider the graph represented in <a href="#fig-a-graph-containing-a-collection"></a>. The result of applying an <a>UpdateList</a> operation on the collection in that graph can be seen in <a href="#fig-updatelist-result"></a>.
             </p>
 
-            <figure>
+            <figure id="fig-a-graph-containing-a-collection">
               <img src="fig-alt-update-list.svg" alt="( &quote;lorem&quote; &quote;ipsum&quote; &quote;dolor&quote; &quote;sit&quote; &quote;amet&quote; ) ( &quote;foo&quote; &quote;bar&quote; &quote;baz&quote; )">
-              <figcaption>A graph containing a collection</figcaption>
+              <figcaption>Graph with a collection</figcaption>
             </figure>
 
             <figure id="fig-updatelist-result">
               <img src="fig-alt-update-list-2.svg" alt="( &quote;lorem&quote; &quote;ipsum&quote; &quote;dolor&quote; &quote;sit&quote; &quote;amet&quote; ) ( &quote;foo&quote; &quote;bar&quote; &quote;baz&quote; )">
-              <figcaption>The result of applying <code>UpdateList :s :p 2..4 ("foo" "bar" "baz") .</code> to the graph above.</figcaption>
+              <figcaption>Applying <code>UpdateList</code></figcaption>
             </figure>
           </section>