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- This primer provides an introduction to Linked Data Platform (LDP), including examples which explain the principal concepts, including the LDP resource, the contribution of the container and the associated affordances. Two sample scenarios show how an LDP client can interact with a LDP server in the context of read-write Linked Data application i.e. how to HTTP for accessing, updating, creating and deleting resources from servers that expose their resources as Linked Data.
+ This primer provides an introduction to the Linked Data Platform (LDP), with examples illustrating the principal concepts such as the notion of an LDP resource and the LDP container and how they can be used by Web clients.
+ Two sample scenarios show how an LDP client can interact with a LDP server in the context of read-write Linked Data application i.e. how to use HTTP for accessing, updating, creating and deleting resources from servers that expose their resources as Linked Data.
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