Updated abstract and publication dates for PR
authorSteve Speicher <sspeiche@gmail.com>
Thu, 11 Dec 2014 08:30:51 -0500
changeset 920 6e705e6cd210
parent 919 2d4ffef6750c
child 921 c79dd6f48a29
Updated abstract and publication dates for PR
ldp.html
--- a/ldp.html	Tue Dec 02 22:44:03 2014 -0500
+++ b/ldp.html	Thu Dec 11 08:30:51 2014 -0500
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
           // subtitle   :  "an excellent document",
 
           // if you wish the publication date to be other than today, set this
-          publishDate:  "2014-11-06",
+          publishDate:  "2014-12-11",
 
           // if the specification's copyright date is a range of years, specify
           // the start date here:
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 
           // if this is a LCWD, uncomment and set the end of its review period
           lcEnd: "2014-10-07",
-          prEnd: "2014-12-04",
+          prEnd: "2015-01-08",
           //crEnd: "2014-07-17",
           
           testSuiteURI: "https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/tests/ldp-testsuite.html",
@@ -236,11 +236,9 @@
   </head>
 <body>
 <section id='abstract'>
-This document describes a set of best practices and simple approach for a read-write Linked Data architecture, based on
-HTTP access to web resources that describe their state using the <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr>
-data model.
+Linked Data Platform (LDP) defines a set of rules for HTTP operations on web resources, some based on 
+<abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr>, to provide an architecture for read-write Linked Data on the web.
 </section>
-
  <section id='sotd'>
    <p>
    	 This is the Proposed Recommendation working draft where the Working Group has received community feedback,