discovery-api/Overview.src.html
changeset 390 6211d232766d
parent 388 f6ad389be556
child 391 8621c3c1faf5
--- a/discovery-api/Overview.src.html	Fri Feb 08 15:11:05 2013 +0100
+++ b/discovery-api/Overview.src.html	Fri Feb 08 15:23:08 2013 +0100
@@ -926,17 +926,17 @@
           <dd>
             <p>
               Returns <code>true</code> if the service is reporting that it is accessible on the local network or
-              <code>false</code> if the service is reporting that it is no longer accessible (temporarily or
-              permanently) on the local network.
+              <code>false</code> if the service is no longer accessible (temporarily or permanently) on the local
+              network.
             </p>
           </dd>
         </dl>
         <p>
           The <dfn id="dom-networkservice-online"><code>online</code></dfn> attribute indicates whether the service is
-          reporting itself as being either <var>online</var>, and therefore accessible on the local network, in which
-          case this attribute will return <code>true</code> or, <var>offline</var>, and therefore not accessible on the
-          local network, either temporarily or permanently, in which case this attribute will return
-          <code>false</code>. This attribute MUST default to <code>true</code>.
+          either <var>online</var>, and therefore accessible on the local network, in which case this attribute will
+          return <code>true</code> or, <var>offline</var>, and therefore not accessible on the local network, either
+          temporarily or permanently, in which case this attribute will return <code>false</code>. This attribute MUST
+          default to <code>true</code>.
         </p>
       </section>
       <section>