Even more thorugh removal of the abstract IndieUI references to make really darn sure I'm not flogged by anal retention on it.
authorMichael Cooper <cooper@w3.org>
Fri, 18 Apr 2014 10:16:19 -0400
changeset 187 1dae47b6946e
parent 186 5682a8a81907
child 188 2ca0e74af974
Even more thorugh removal of the abstract IndieUI references to make really darn sure I'm not flogged by anal retention on it.
src/indie-ui-requirements.html
--- a/src/indie-ui-requirements.html	Fri Apr 18 10:11:15 2014 -0400
+++ b/src/indie-ui-requirements.html	Fri Apr 18 10:16:19 2014 -0400
@@ -366,7 +366,8 @@
 			</section>
 			<section id="requirements_events_uievents">
 				<h3>Extend UI Events</h3>
-				<p>IndieUI Events must extend UIEvents unless the IndieUI requirements are met directly in UI Events.</p>
+				<p>IndieUI Events must extend UIEvents unless the requirements are met directly in UI
+					Events.</p>
 				<p class="addresses">Addresses scenario(s):</p>
 				<p class="metby">Met by: <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/IndieUI/raw-file/tip/src/indie-ui-events.html#UIRequestEvent">UIRequestEvent</a></p>
 			</section>
@@ -598,7 +599,9 @@
 		<!-- :::::::::::::::::::: OTHER REQUIREMENTS :::::::::::::::::::: -->
 		<section id="requirements_other">
 			<h2>Other Requirements</h2>
-			<p>Requirements in this section address the IndieUI space but are expected to be met by other current and future work than IndieUI. They are included here to help provide a complete picture of the IndieUI requirements space.</p>
+			<p>Requirements in this section address goals fo the IndieUI Working Group but are expected to be
+				met by current and future work from other efforts. They are included here to help provide a
+				complete picture of the requirements space addressed by the IndieUI Working Group.</p>
 		</section>
 		<!-- :::::::::::::::::::: END OTHER REQUIREMENTS :::::::::::::::::::: -->