Simple editorial fixes identified in review
authorcharles
Fri, 16 Dec 2016 16:03:40 +0100
changeset 214 2d52e884464d
parent 213 12517fd153e3
child 215 2ddb5be7fe6e
Simple editorial fixes identified in review
cover.html
--- a/cover.html	Wed Nov 09 19:17:03 2016 +0100
+++ b/cover.html	Fri Dec 16 16:03:40 2016 +0100
@@ -726,7 +726,8 @@
       <p>The Advisory Board and a portion of the Technical Architecture Group are elected by the Advisory Committee, using a
         Single Transferable Vote system. An election begins when the Team sends a Call for Nominations to the Advisory Committee.
         Any Call for Nominations specifies the number of available seats, the deadline for nominations, details about the
-        specific vote tabulation system selected by the Team for the election, and operational information. The Team 
+        specific vote tabulation system selected by the Team for the election, and operational information such as how to
+        nominate a candidate. The Team 
         <em class="rfc2119">may</em> modify the  tabulation system after the Call for Nominations but
         <em class="rfc2119">must</em> stabilize it no later than the Call for Votes. The Director <em class="rfc2119">should</em>
         announce appointments no later than the start of a nomination period as part of the Call for Nominations.</p>
@@ -1525,8 +1526,7 @@
 
         <h4>5.2.7 <dfn id="GeneralTermination">Working Group and Interest Group Closure</dfn></h4>
 
-        <p>A Working Group or Interest Group charter specifies a duration for the group. The Director, subject to
-          an <a href="#ACAppeal">Advisory Committee Appeal</a> initiated by Advisory Committee representatives,
+        <p>A Working Group or Interest Group charter specifies a duration for the group. The Director
           <em class="rfc2119">may</em> decide to close a group prior to the date specified in the charter in
           any of the following circumstances:</p>
 
@@ -1536,7 +1536,9 @@
           <li>The group produces chartered deliverables ahead of schedule.</li>
         </ul>
 
-        <p>The Director closes a Working Group or Interest Group by announcement to the Advisory Committee.</p>
+        <p>The Director closes a Working Group or Interest Group by announcement to the Advisory Committee.
+          Advisory Committee representatives <em class="">may</em> initiate an
+          <a href="#ACAppeal">Advisory Committee Appeal</a>.</p>
 
         <p>Closing a Working Group has implications with respect to the
           <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C Patent Policy</a>
@@ -2431,9 +2433,9 @@
        although it is not recommended for future implementation; a Rescinded Recommendation ceases to be in effect
        and no new licenses are granted under the Patent Policy.</p>
 
-      <p>The Director <em class="rfc2119">may</em> recommend obsoleting rescinding or restoring a Recommendation. The Director
-        <em class="rfc2119">must</em> begin a review of a proposal to obsolete, rescind or restore a Recommendation
-        when requested to do so by any of the following:</p>
+      <p>The Director <em class="rfc2119">may</em> recommend obsoleting, rescinding, or restoring a Recommendation. The Director
+        <em class="rfc2119">must</em> begin an <a href="#ACReview">Advisory Committee review</a> of a
+        proposal to obsolete, rescind, or restore a Recommendation when requested to do so by any of the following:</p>
 
       <ul>
         <li>The Working Group who produced, or is chartered to maintain, the Recommendation.</li>
@@ -2461,7 +2463,7 @@
       <p>and <em class="rfc2119">should</em></p>
 
       <ul>
-        <li>identify known implementation.</li>
+        <li>identify known implementations.</li>
       </ul>
 
       <p>If there was any <a href="#def-Dissent" rel="glossary"><span class="dfn-instance">dissent</span></a>
@@ -2563,14 +2565,13 @@
 
       <p>When a W3C decision is made following an <a href="#ACReview">Advisory Committee review</a>, Advisory Committee
         representatives <em class="rfc2119">may</em> initiate an <a href="#def-w3c-decision">Advisory Committee Appeal</a>.
-        These W3C decisions are identified in the sections that explain the requirements for the decisions and include decisions
-        related to group creation and modification, and changing maturity levels for Recommendation Track documents and the
-        Process document.</p>
+        These W3C decisions include those related to group creation and modification, and transitions to new maturity levels
+        for Recommendation Track documents and the Process document.</p>
 
       <p>Advisory Committee representatives <em class="rfc2119">may</em> also initiate an appeal for certain Director's decisions
-        that do not involve an Advisory Committee review. These, too, are identified in the sections which describe the
+        that do not involve an Advisory Committee review. These cases are identified in the sections which describe the
         requirements for the Director's decision and include additional (non-reviewed) maturity levels of Recommendation Track
-        documents, group charter extensions and closures, and Memorandums of Understanding.</p>
+        documents, group charter extensions and closures, and Memoranda of Understanding.</p>
 
       <p>In all cases, an appeal <em class="rfc2119">must</em> be initiated within <span class="time-interval">three weeks</span>
         of the decision.</p>
@@ -2606,7 +2607,8 @@
 
       <p>The Call for Participation in a Workshop or Symposium <em class="rfc2119">may</em> indicate participation requirements or 
         limits, and expected deliverables (e.g., reports and minutes). Organization of an event does not guarantee further
-        investment by W3C in a particular topic, but <em class="rfc2119">may</em> lead to proposals for new activities or groups.</p>
+        investment by W3C in a particular topic, but <em class="rfc2119">may</em> lead to proposals for
+        new activities or groups.</p>
 
       <p>Workshops and Symposia generally last one to three days. If a Workshop is being organized to address the pressing concerns
         of Members, the Team <em class="rfc2119">must</em> issue the Call for Participation no later than