Editorial polishing, cleaning up date, etc. Nothing substantive…
authorcharles
Wed, 05 Feb 2014 17:25:24 +0400
changeset 77 acebbefd27bb
parent 76 20fb4f012006
child 78 823e91257c06
Editorial polishing, cleaning up date, etc. Nothing substantive…
tr.html
--- a/tr.html	Tue Feb 04 23:06:22 2014 +0400
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@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
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       <h1 class="title" id="title">Recommendation Track Process draft proposal</h1>
       <h2 id="draft-shorthand-status"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium"></abbr>Editors'
-        Draft 2 February 2014</h2>
+        Draft 5 February 2014</h2>
       <dl>
         <dt>Current active version:</dt>
         <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr.html">http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr.html</a></dd>
@@ -51,11 +51,16 @@
       <div class="navbar">
         <p>This is a draft proposal to replace the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr.html">current
             chapter 7 of the W3C process document</a> with a more effective W3C
-          Specification life cycle following the meeting of the W3C Advisory
-          Board's Chapter 7 Task Force on 3 February 2014. As foreshadowed at
-          that meeting and in email to the W3Process Community Group, this draft
-          re-establishes a Proposed Recommendation phase, and clarifies the
-          requirements for revising a Candidate Recommendation.</p>
+          Specification life cycle. </p>
+        <p>This draft incorporates changes following the meeting of the W3C
+          Advisory Board's Chapter 7 Task Force on 3 February 2014. As
+          foreshadowed at that meeting and in email to the W3Process Community
+          Group, this draft re-establishes a Proposed Recommendation phase, and
+          clarifies the requirements for revising a Candidate Recommendation.</p>
+        <p>Because these are significant changes from recent drafts, careful
+          review is requested. It is quite possible that the changes introduced
+          in the new section 7.6 and in sections 7.5 and 7.7 include some
+          mistakes or new problems that need to be addressed.</p>
         <p>This introductory section (before the chapter title below) will be
           removed when this chapter is re-incorporated into the full process
           document.</p>
@@ -189,14 +194,8 @@
           <li><a href="#revised-cr">7.4.1 Revised Candidate Recommendation</a></li>
         </ul>
       </li>
-      <li><a href="#rec-publication">7.5 W3C Recommendation</a>
-        <ul>
-          <li><a href="#for-all-recs">7.5.1 For all W3C Recommendations</a></li>
-          <li><a href="#lcrec-publication">7.5.2 Publishing a Candidate
-              Recommendation as a W3C Recommendation</a></li>
-        </ul>
-      </li>
-      <li> <a href="#rec-pr">7.6 Proposed Recommendation</a></li>
+      <li> <a href="#rec-pr">7.5 Proposed Recommendation</a></li>
+      <li> <a href="#rec-publication">7.6 W3C Recommendation</a></li>
       <li><a href="#rec-modify">7.7 Modifying a W3C Recommendation</a>
         <ul>
           <li><a href="#errata">7.7.1 Errata Management</a></li>
@@ -250,56 +249,50 @@
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     <p>W3C <em class="rfc2119">may</em> <a href="#tr-end">end work on a
         technical report</a> at any time.</p>
     <p>The Director <em class="rfc2119">may</em> decline a request to advance
@@ -344,7 +337,7 @@
         accepted as Recommendations. Announcement of a different next step <em
           class="rfc2119">should</em> include the reasons why the change in
         expectations comes at so late a stage.</dd>
-      <dt>Proposed Recommendation</dt>
+      <dt id="RecsPR">Proposed Recommendation</dt>
       <dd>A Proposed Recommendation is a document that has been accepted by the
         W3C Director as of sufficient quality to become a W3C Recommendation.
         This phase establishes a deadline for the Advisory Committee review
@@ -658,8 +651,8 @@
       made to a Candidate Recommendation other than to remove features
       explicitly identified as "at risk", the Director <em class="rfc2119">must</em>&nbsp;
       approve the publication of a revised Candidate Recommendation. This is
-      because substantive changes will generally require a new Exclusion Opportunity
-      per <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy/#sec-Exclusion">section
+      because substantive changes will generally require a new Exclusion
+      Opportunity per <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy/#sec-Exclusion">section
         4</a> of the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C
         Patent Policy</a> [<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/refs.html#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>].
       Note that approval is <em>expected</em> to be fairly simple compared to
@@ -732,8 +725,6 @@
           explain the reasons for that decision. </span></li>
     </ul>
     <h3 id="rec-publication">7.6 W3C Recommendation</h3>
-    <h4 id="for-all-recs"><a id="rec-requirements">7.6.1 For <strong>all</strong>
-        W3C Recommendations</a></h4>
     <p>In addition to meeting the <a href="#transition-reqs">general
         requirements for advancement</a>,</p>
     <ul>