Editorial cleanup, preparation for publishing, changes consolidated, etc
authorcharles
Tue, 11 Oct 2016 12:13:34 +0200
changeset 203 4ff08164b7fa
parent 202 096b4dfbe4f2
child 204 1c083d0b0507
Editorial cleanup, preparation for publishing, changes consolidated, etc
cover.html
--- a/cover.html	Tue Oct 11 11:48:41 2016 +0200
+++ b/cover.html	Tue Oct 11 12:13:34 2016 +0200
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   <body>
     <div class="head"><a href="https://www.w3.org/"><img alt="W3C" src="https://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" height="48" width="72"></a>
       <h1>W3C Editor's Draft Process Document</h1>
-      <h2 class="notoc">9 October 2016 Editor's Draft</h2>
+      <h2 class="notoc">11 October 2016 Editor's Draft</h2>
       <dl>
         <dt>Latest Editor's version:</dt>
          <dd><a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html">https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html</a></dd>
@@ -1324,8 +1324,8 @@
           a designation, the <a href="#def-Director">Director</a> determines whether the individual will be invited to
           participate in the Working Group.</p>
 
-        <p><dfn id="inv-expert-info">To be able to participate in a Working Group as an Invited Expert</dfn>, an individual
-          <em class="rfc2119">must</em> do all of the following:</p>
+        <p>To <dfn id="inv-expert-info">participate in a Working Group as an Invited Expert</dfn>, an individual
+          <em class="rfc2119">must</em>:</p>
 
         <ul>
           <li>identify the organization, if any, the individual represents as a participant in this group,</li>
@@ -1612,9 +1612,9 @@
     <g id="Rectrac-FPWD" role="listitem" aria-labelledby="Rectrac-fpwd-label Rectrac-fpwd-text">
       <title id="Rectrac-fpwd-label">First Public Working Draft - Exclusion Opportunity</title>
       <a xlink:href="#Rectrac-nodeWD">
-        <text font-size="8"><tspan y="136" x="6">First WD</tspan>
-          <tspan x="4" y="150">WG Decision</tspan>
-          <tspan x="4" y="158">Director's approval</tspan></text>
+        <text font-size="8"><tspan y="132" x="0">First WD</tspan>
+          <tspan x="0" y="152">WG Decision</tspan>
+          <tspan x="0" y="162">Director's approval</tspan></text>
         <path d="M0,140h53" fill="none" stroke="#000"></path>
         <polygon points="47,136 57,140 47,144"></polygon></a>
     </g>
@@ -1625,7 +1625,7 @@
         <ellipse ry="18" rx="38" cy="140" cx="97" stroke="black" fill="#fff"></ellipse>
         <text font-size="14" y="144" x="97" text-anchor="middle">WD</text></a>
 
-<!-- Experiment 1: use g[role=listitem] with a link inside it -->
+<!-- g[role=listitem] with a link inside it -->
 
       <g id="Rectrac-repeatWD" role="listitem">
         <a xlink:href="#Rectrac-nodeWD" aria-labelledby="Rectrac-repeatwd-label Rectrac-repeatwd-text">
@@ -1651,15 +1651,14 @@
         <ellipse ry="18" rx="38" cy="140" cx="260" stroke="black" fill="#fff"></ellipse>
         <text font-size="14" y="144" x="260" text-anchor="middle">CR</text></a>
 
-<!-- Experiment 2: use a instead of g -->
+<!-- a instead of g -->
 
       <a xlink:href="#Rectrac-nodeCR" id="Rectrac-repeatCR"
         aria-labelledby="Rectrac-repeatcr-label Rectrac-repeatcr-text" fill="#060">
         <title id="Rectrac-repeatcr-label">Publish a revised CR</title>
         <text role="none" font-size="8" id="Rectrac-repeatcr-text">
-          <tspan x="225" y="80">Working Group Decision,</tspan>
-          <tspan x="225" y="90">Directors approval for</tspan>
-          <tspan x="230" y="100">substantive changes</tspan></text>
+          <tspan x="225" y="84">Working Group Decision,</tspan>
+          <tspan x="240" y="96">Directors approval</tspan></text>
         <path stroke="#000" d="M242,124C238,114 244,104 260,104 271,104 277,108 279,114"
           stroke-dasharray="5 11" fill="none"></path>
         <path stroke="#060" d="M242,124C238,114 244,104 260,104 271,104 277,108 279,114"
@@ -1689,7 +1688,7 @@
         <ellipse ry="18" rx="28" cy="140" cx="413" stroke="black" fill="#fff"></ellipse>
         <text font-size="14" font-family="Times,serif" y="144" x="413" text-anchor="middle">PR</text></a>
 
-<!-- Experiment 3: use a[role=listitem] instead of g -->
+<!-- use a[role=listitem] instead of g -->
 
       <a xlink:href="#Rectrac-nodeRec" id="Rectrac-ToRec" role="listitem"
         aria-labelledby="Rectrac-torec-label Rectrac-torec-text" fill="#060">
@@ -1714,8 +1713,8 @@
       <a xlink:href="#Rectrac-nodeWD" id="Rectrac-PRBackToWD" role="listitem"
         aria-labelledby="Rectrac-prbacktowd-label Rectrac-prbacktowd-text" fill="#c00">
         <title id="Rectrac-prbacktowd-label">Return to Working Draft</title> 
-        <text role="none" id="Rectrac-prbacktowd-text" font-size="8">
-          <tspan x="102" y="188">Advisory Committee review and Director's Decision, e.g. for further work and review</tspan></text>
+        <text role="none" id="Rectrac-prbacktowd-text" font-size="9">
+          <tspan x="90" y="192">Advisory Committee review and Director's Decision, e.g. for further work and review</tspan></text>
         <path d="M413,158v22h-316v-16" stroke-dasharray="2 2" stroke="#c00" fill="none"></path>
         <polygon points="95,164 97,159 99,164"></polygon> </a>
     </g>
@@ -2993,72 +2992,31 @@
       <h2 id="changes">14 Changes</h2>
 
       <p>This document is based on the <a href="https://www.w3.org/2015/Process-20150901/">1 September 2015 Process</a>.
-        <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/">Detailed change logs</a> are available.</p>
-
-      <p>The notable changes include:</p>
-
-      <h3>Between the current draft and the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/cfef536bff0d/cover.html">3 August 2016 Draft</a>.
-      <ul>
-        <li>Allow Edited Recommendations to incorporate editorial changes without Advisory Committee review. 
-          <a href="#revised-rec">Section 6.7.2</a>.</li>
-        <li>Remove the proposed restriction on publishing exclusion-triggering documents when new charters are proposed.
-          Sections <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a> and <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>.</li>
-      </ul> 
-
-      <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/cfef536bff0d/cover.html">3 August 2016 Draft</a> and the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/64c6d6a5b1c0/cover.html">31 July 2016 Draft</a>:</h3>
+        <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/">Detailed logs of all changes</a> are available.</p>
+
+      <p>Substantive changes compared to the <a href="https://www.w3.org/2015/Process-20150901/">1 September 2015 Process</a>
+        include:</p>
 
       <ul>
-        <li>Clearer requirements for charters which continue work that has already had an Exclusion Opportunity
-          - section <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>.</li>
-      </ul>
-
-      <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/64c6d6a5b1c0/cover.html">31 July 2016 Draft</a> and
-        the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/9827cf0fed91/cover.html">28 July 2016 draft</a>:</h3>
-
-      <ul>
-        <li>Replace diagrams of Recommendation track with new versions to improve accessibility 
+        <li>Allow Edited Recommendations to incorporate editorial changes without Advisory Committee review 
+          - <a href="#revised-rec">Section 6.7.2</a></li>
+        <li>Replace diagrams of Recommendation track with new versions to improve accessibility and accuracy
           - section <a href="#recs-and-notes">6.1.1</a> and section <a href="#rec-modify">6.7</a></li>
-        <li>Remove mention of appeal for decisions not defined in the Process
-          - section <a href="#rec-rescind">7.2</a></li>
         <li>Remove statement that W3C does not organise conferences
           - section <a href="#GAEvents">8</a></li>
-      </ul>
-
-      <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/9827cf0fed91/cover.html">28 July 2016 draft</a> and the
-        <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/80f98ce79b35/cover.html">18 July 2016 draft</a>:</h3> 
-
-      <ul>
-        <li>Further editorial clarification that an Obsolete Recommendation can be "unobsoleted"
+        <li>Added a process to make a Recommendation Obsolete - section <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
+        <li>Clarified the process to rescind a Recommendation, aligning with with obsoleting a Recommendation
           - section <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
-        <li>More clarification for charters which continue work that has already had an Exclusion Opportunity
-          - <a href="#CharterReview">5.2.3</a>, <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a>, and <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>.</li>
-      </ul>
-
-      <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/80f98ce79b35/cover.html">18 July 2016 draft</a> and the
-        <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/f070f753bcea/cover.html">10 July 2016 draft</a>:</h3> 
-
-      <ul>
-        <li>Editorial clarification of the status of an Obsolete Recommendation - section <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
-        <li>Editorial clarification for charters which continue work that has already had an Exclusion Opportunity
-          - <a href="#CharterReview">5.2.3</a>, <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a>, and <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>.</li>
-      </ul>
-
-      <h3>Between the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/f070f753bcea/cover.html">10 July 2016 draft</a> and the 
-        <a href="https://www.w3.org/2015/Process-20150901/">1 September 2015 Process</a></h3>
-
-      <ul>
-        <li>Added a process to make a Recommendation Obsolete - <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
-        <li>Clarified the process to rescind a Recommendation, aligning with with obsoleting a Recommendation - 
-          <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
-        <li>Clarified the process for continuing work on a specification initially developed under another charter - 
-          <a href="#CharterReview">5.2.3</a>, <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a>, <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>,
+        <li>Clarified the process for continuing work on a specification initially developed under another charter
+          - sections <a href="#CharterReview">5.2.3</a>, <a href="#cfp">5.2.4</a>, <a href="#WGCharter">5.2.6</a>,
           <a href="#transition-reqs">6.2.2</a>.</li>
-        <li>Changed the voting for AB and TAG elections to Single Transferable Vote - <a href="AB-TAG-Elections">2.5.2</a></li>
-        <li>Clarified the rights and obligations of Member Consortia and their representatives -
-          <a href="#MemberBenefits">2.1.1</a></li>
-        <li>Renumber - 5.2.8 becomes 5.2.7 (there was no section 5.2.7)</li>
-        <li>Simplify Appeals, so they can occur whether there was dissent or not, and in a broader range of cases - 
-          especially <a href="#candidate-rec">6.4</a>, <a href="#rec-publication">6.6</a>, <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a>,
+        <li>Changed the voting for AB and TAG elections to Single Transferable Vote
+          - section <a href="AB-TAG-Elections">2.5.2</a></li>
+        <li>Clarified the rights and obligations of Member Consortia and their representatives
+          - section <a href="#MemberBenefits">2.1.1</a></li>
+        <li>Renumber: 5.2.8 becomes 5.2.7 because there was no section 5.2.7</li>
+        <li>Simplify Appeals, so they can occur whether there was dissent or not, and in a broader range of cases 
+          - sections <a href="#candidate-rec">6.4</a>, <a href="#rec-publication">6.6</a>, <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a>,
           <a href="#ReviewAppeal">7</a>, <a href="#ACAppeal">7.2</a>, <a href="ACVotes">7.3</a>,
           <a href="#Submission">10</a>, <a href="#SubmissionNo">10.4</a>, <a href="#GAProcess">11</a></li>
       </ul>