Grammar correction
authorcharles
Sun, 31 Jul 2016 01:41:17 +0200
changeset 182 02ee05670f47
parent 181 70158506681c
child 183 35bdaa48359e
Grammar correction
cover.html
--- a/cover.html	Sun Jul 31 01:37:19 2016 +0200
+++ b/cover.html	Sun Jul 31 01:41:17 2016 +0200
@@ -1111,10 +1111,11 @@
             and</li>
           <li>the individual qualifies for <a href="#member-rep">Member representation</a>.</li>
         </ul>
-        <p><dfn id="member-rep-info">To designate an individual as a Member representative in a Working Group</dfn>, an Advisory Committee
-          representative <em class="rfc2119">must</em> provide the Chair and Team Contact with all of the following information, in
-          addition to any other information required by the <a href="#cfp">Call for Participation</a> and charter (including the
-          participation requirements of the <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C Patent Policy</a> [<a href="#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>]):</p>
+        <p><dfn id="member-rep-info">To designate an individual as a Member representative in a Working Group</dfn>, an
+          Advisory Committee representative <em class="rfc2119">must</em> provide the Chair and Team Contact with all of
+          the following information, in addition to any other information required by the <a href="#cfp">Call for Participation</a>
+          and charter (including the participation requirements of the
+          <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C Patent Policy</a> [<a href="#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>]):</p>
         <ol>
           <li>The name of the W3C Member the individual represents and whether the individual is an employee of that Member organization;</li>
           <li>A statement that the individual accepts the participation terms set forth in the charter (with an indication of charter date
@@ -1337,8 +1338,8 @@
           <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C Patent Policy</a> [<a href="#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>]</p>
 
         <p>The Director <em class="rfc2119">must not</em> issue a call for participation less than 60 days after the beginning of
-          an Advisory Committee Review for a charter that continues work on a Reference Draft or Candidate for which an 
-          Exclusion Opportunity has occurred.</p>
+          an Advisory Committee Review for a charter that continues work on a document that has had a Reference Draft or
+          Candidate Recommendation published.</p>
 
         <p id="ig-charter-participation">An Interest Group charter <em class="rfc2119">may</em> include provisions regarding
           participation, including specifying that the <dfn id="ig-mail-only">only requirement for participation (by anyone) in